Vigil

By Blood Saga

It was no longer a glass half-empty or half-full
or whatever the saying was that sparked
so much disagreement;
that point had come and gone long ago.
It was just plain empty now.

Infinite glasses of dark amber
wouldn't put the world back in order.

So he went out into the midnight cold
and formed a small, drunken snowman
from the gray slush piled by the roadside.

It was a vigil older than religion,
held in the city so the sun would rise
and the bar would reopen.










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Copyright 2011 Blood Saga
Published on Saturday, December 17, 2011.     Filed under: "Fiction" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Oh wow.. what imagery.. I love this, thanks for sharing :)

  • whisperingwalls On Wednesday, December 21, 2011, whisperingwalls (219)By person wrote:

    So he went out into the midnight cold and formed a small, drunken snowman from the gray slush piled by the roadside... What sharp imagery; real, aware writing.. This is beautiful, all of it, but that stanza blew me out of the water.

  • dwells On Saturday, December 17, 2011, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    This was so new and unexpected that I'm still blown away. Don't see too many adult / real life scenes portrayed in these parts nowadays, thanks.

  • A former member wrote: "Just plain empty now". I'm a glass half-full kinda guy but this a perfect poem for this time of year, Saga. That ending has me buzzin' over here. Thank you & cheers!!!

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