Vigil
By Blood Saga
It was no longer a glass half-empty or half-full
or whatever the saying
was that sparked
so much disagreement;
that point had come
and gone long ago.
It was just plain empty now.
Infinite
glasses of dark amber
wouldn't put the world back in order.
So he went out into the midnight cold
and formed a small, drunken
snowman
from the gray slush piled by the roadside.
It was
a vigil older than religion,
held in the city so the sun would rise
and the bar would reopen.
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Copyright 2011 Blood Saga
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A former member wrote:
Oh wow.. what imagery.. I love this, thanks for sharing :)
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On Wednesday, December 21, 2011, whisperingwalls
(210) wrote:
So he went out into the midnight cold and formed a small, drunken snowman from the gray slush piled by the roadside... What sharp imagery; real, aware writing.. This is beautiful, all of it, but that stanza blew me out of the water.
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On Saturday, December 17, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
This was so new and unexpected that I'm still blown away. Don't see too many adult / real life scenes portrayed in these parts nowadays, thanks.
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A former member wrote:
"Just plain empty now". I'm a glass half-full kinda guy but this a perfect poem for this time of year, Saga. That ending has me buzzin' over here. Thank you & cheers!!!