Comments by MikeShank1989
- "The way in which you compared a heartbeat with the gentle sound of rain on a window was potent imagery. I also liked the play on words in "But you're an investment my dear, mature, grow up." A wonderful write to be sure. "
Posted by MikeShank1989 on "Situational Apprehension" by Imsosickxxx
- "A bitter dialogue sir. Very well written. The last two lines were perfect. I appreciated "murmember". Thank you for sharing bud."
Posted by MikeShank1989 on "Some Party" by soloiq
- "I think aiming at the pursuit of perfection is a great idea. You've done very well to portray the feeling of wanting to be free of societal restrictions. Wonderful write and welcome to DP! "
Posted by MikeShank1989 on "The Perfect Puppet" by Ashes the Emo Fae
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