A moments Thought

By SaintNHB

I'm unalive, unidentified
my soul has no where to go
I'm stressed out, with immense doubt
I have nothing in life to show

My scars are real, I touch the raise upon my skin thats pale
Gashes so deep, at first they don't bleed
I found a realm I sail
Storm skies, afflicted oceans
I fly over the rail

I drown in this affliction, I drown in all my pain
Drownings the worst way to die when all your life you've lived in rain
When all your life you've been insane.

-SaintNHB

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Copyright 2011 SaintNHB
Published on Sunday, November 20, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Quick write I did... Just how I was feeling
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  • FadedBlues On Saturday, January 21, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    NHB, 'a life lived in rain', contemplative concept...the metaphorical drowning is strong imagery...

  • dwells On Monday, November 21, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Glad to see you back in action and wishing I could loan you my snorkle. Very sad song you sing, thanks.

  • MikeShank1989 On Sunday, November 20, 2011, MikeShank1989 (92)By person wrote:

    I dig it boss. The second verse was pretty great. Thanks for sharing the write.

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