emotion flow - unstructured - lover's point of view

By alesana

dressed in white satin
a gown of innocence
I bear you in my arms
I shall carry you home
your breathless body
weighs heavy on me
limp and lifeless
the girl I loved
so, so loved
even now you shine
so beautiful, so pure
I'll be close behind you
I refuse to lose you

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Copyright 2011 Meg Owens
Published on Saturday, November 26, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • MikeShank1989 On Saturday, November 26, 2011, MikeShank1989 (92)By person wrote:

    Great write. Your story had me entranced. Incredible piece really.

  • ColorMeToxic On Saturday, November 26, 2011, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    Nice...Made me think of the story of "Romeo and Juliet". Scholar

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