Comments by Poetic-Realm
- "I could spend an entire year relating to this, especially the closing word. Your heaviness is my heaviness, we just carry it for different reasons, because they were given to us differently. I do not know just how to compliment your work, everything I want to say is too far off and distant dancing with your haziness. You are a gift, your soul I see."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "bells of jellyfish" by Corinthian
- "This was read very tenderly, I saw hikes trails and ear to ear smiles. I wish I understood the quote, but its above me! Maybe its because I am the reader, and its one of those "you had to be there." moments."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Adayr." by Dei
- "This took me deep into all that is the scarlet you... I felt the animal in your bite and the woman in your whisper. I tried to claspe onto beautiful images to save me from the summit and downfall. There is rough pain skimming through your veins and you don't handle it tenderly. You take heed in it's independent mind-giving soulfulness but you yearn for the others who would cut your hair and tie bells amongst your strands. Sending them into the bonfire during the rain dance of your body. Exquisite images following me here. If there was ever a poem of nautical fire and dried waterfalls spitting lessons to the one who begs for the lonesome intelligence and unreal visions of love this would be it. At least this is how I see it. Maybe I am just not diving deep enough...."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "brazen" by Feral
- "Very wise to lock it back up thats for certain! Hahaha. I love the concept and the metaphor here, very gripping other than the snap ending. It just leaves me begging for more, which may not be the case for every reader, but always a good thought to toss around the ol' noggin!"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on ""Jaded"" by bluehoney19
- "Man I really wish this could have been a bit longer. Theres so many questions I have regarding this beast! Haha. More imagery would have really tied this together nicely, especially at the end. The last stanza seems slightly rushed, but maybe that was your point. To explain hkw quickly we turn jaded from the beast maybe?"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on ""Jaded"" by bluehoney19
- "Simply put: that secondhand breaking and falling, getting stuck in the glass of the clock, crawling with sneaky bugs that got in but cant get out.... stops everything that was and eliminate futures. I feel ya."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "the years between." by eidos
- "Our stories are strikingly similar other than the personalities of our grandmothers. Mine was a bit more rugged, and would stash the photos away so we wouldn't have to see her cry. Good story, I feel ya."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Her Sanpaku Eyes" by ColorMeToxic
- "Magic.... pure magic. I like the little tongue twisters sent about as well. Fun to try and speed read aloud haha, good practice too! The metaphorical prowess gliding throughout this piece is definitely one to be sought after by those in need of am example on HOW TO create concrete and universal, yet unique and totally personal imagery for the reader. It seems to tap into both my conscious and subconscious in all the same strokes. Like a dream, like a memory, like a future hope, all tied together..."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "tangled veins (blow away)" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "This was pretty awesome. I can agree in some ways, but I would say alongside an ego, freewill was another gift. The last line was by far the best. Icarus with burning wings, we'll fall."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Polytheism" by Melancholic VIncent
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