Comments by urbanhumility

  • "it seems that nature has brought you solace......often it is alone when we find solace.......a pillar of inner strenth.........well done my friend fish.........urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "to wander" by Jonas
  • "deep.......telling, the last line hit me....., i like it when you are "real".....well done my friend....urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "skipping stones" by Jonas
  • "i want to have a biopsy of your brain, if you pass before i , possibly to map your strange and fantastic world..........urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "3 freewrite" by Jonas
  • "there is a infusion of projected nostalgia here, and it is beautiful.......i am on the balcony, in your universe, listening to the radio, looking at your billboard, beliving in the dream..............well done my good friend........urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "self-conscious" by Jonas
  • "on the road, by Jack Keroak, i mean Jonas D. jk. sounds like a good trip...., may the road rise to your feet, and the sun shine upon your back......charley"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "the new orleans leg" by Jonas
  • "so beautiful, what an experience, i like your parallels here. once again memory solidified in fishessence.......well done.......urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "seventeen years" by Jonas
  • "you own many things my friend, you own a emotional x-ray glance, you own a "matter of fact" voice, you own moments of un-disturbed contemplation; all making you the pescado of our time......well done urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "wallflower" by Jonas
  • "well traveled in the best of ways my friend....humble and having so much wonderlust.....well done..........urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "asphalt" by Jonas
  • "a translator of misunderstood voices, perhaps a generous soul that will listen just for the sake of it......urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "mr. van pelt" by Jonas
  • "i love it when you are alone and thinking.......it makes for my own titilation.......you have spoken with vagabond intelligence(that is a good thing.) im glad i stopped in to hear my friend speak...........urban "
    Posted by urbanhumility on "sleep escapes as i greet the season" by Jonas
  • "beautiful words of fable in lyric fashion.....gracing us with your beautiful locked doors, lending us the key would only put off the inevitable; knowing that true beauty resides in your mind..........urban"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "phoenencian purple does the mobius" by Jonas
  • "fucking brilliant,my friend, the eye on the not so sharp, moving back away from the edge, and not living on it. you seem to have a keen eye on beatblack offenders;i was listening to miles davis while reading this ,this is one of my favs........brilliant,,"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "andy-christ superstar{monroe*and*corn*chowder}" by Jonas
  • "it seems a memoir of elevated philosophy and thought. forthright to yourself, interlaced with "self" moral overtone; a mature and indoctrinated language you speak, well done my friend,well done.....uh"
    Posted by urbanhumility on "revelations written for the enquirer" by Jonas
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