2.2 freewrite
By Jonas
fever springing from oasis
toast and jelly
ed and kelly are getting married today
and it's such a beautiful thing
when two people fall in love
and i'm sure they've thought it through
and wont have any hand in
fucking up the minds of their kids
they'll leave that to television
watching and learning about the moral
dangers of child pornography
while little flashing snips
of the pictures
black bars
hardly
hiding
their cute little nipples
entice you to watch it through
oh, in the name of knowledge
of course
of course
what a beautiful fucking day
i wonder what my mom thought
about it when i started hanging out in the bathroom
way too much
is that Oedipal thought
this is opal thought
little pieces of glitter
dancing around in the sun
as it slowly dries and cracks
like bones
my lips and fingers covered in barbeque sauce
i wonder if the animal
would be happy to know
how happy it's made me
Comments on "2.2 freewrite"
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A former member wrote:
beautifully morbid...ur poetry always brings this gay-ass, sheepish smile on my face - damn j00!!!
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A former member wrote:
this was very beautiful! I like it.
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On Monday, July 12, 2004, Dolly_Fatale
(29) wrote:
so sick so sad so utterly beautiful
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On Tuesday, June 22, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
intangible your thougts, beautiful your words.........well done my friend..........urban
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
opalescence all over the place ... mother of pearl , and the animals dont care what you do to them ... thought constellations , connect the dots .... i see a hand ... fuckin fabulous write man ... still a prince to me ... funguy
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A former member wrote:
dont have the words to express what i felt read this..anyways much respect..
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On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
lol, another entertaining piece, you never lack the ability to make people think and smile at the same time.~~~Grave
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On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
fuck yeah love the nipple visual & it's trippy flow & meaning very very cool stuff here * thanx for sharing * 669 *