Comments by Narcissa
- "the whole piece was fantastic...I didn't want it to sound like it wasn't..its just those lines hit me the hardest...Im still feeling them..."
Posted by Narcissa on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "I think it was all said in those last two lines...bam! and damn!...Ive missed your writing."
Posted by Narcissa on "Alt / red." by Aleas
- "Its good to see you post again...and though this piece is so personal it sticks to my bones cause I carried it around with me all day yesterday when I first read it..."
Posted by Narcissa on "A Confession in Bright Dark." by Aleas
- "Thanks everyone...quite the shock for me since there were so many great pieces...Thanks Stephen for letting me step into your piece and add a bit of me...I still love this!"
Posted by Narcissa on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas
- " "Flowers in an autumn breeze As everything is sure to fade, we'll bloom forevermore." ...love this line... This read like a quiet stream forever soothing fallen rocks and tossed stones...and they will remain there but the beauty of it is that the water still flows serene..."
Posted by Narcissa on "Forever and a Secret." by Aleas
- "The stanza that began "Of that laughter" tore right through me as your works typically do...And though time keeps moving forward its hard not to look back."
Posted by Narcissa on "The Songs We Sing." by Aleas
- "Always a pleasure to work with you. This still stirs feelings every time I read it. Thank you Stephen...Thank you."
Posted by Narcissa on "Remember Me This Way." by Aleas
- "This was brutally beautiful...you know its love when you are left hurting but sometimes you have to seek solace in the peaceful parts even when they are only memories."
Posted by Narcissa on "Begging; Still." by Aleas
- "I always try to refrain on commenting on pieces so personal b/c it seems no matter what is written here it doesn't change what is inside. The pain... The loss...even the hope. Through your voice I feel an utter anquish of your love slipping away."
Posted by Narcissa on "Metal Noose." by Aleas
- "Never saying goodbye means never letting go...but going on you must. We all do and we take that love and pain with us. We go on because we have to and in a way we take them with us. You got me in the last part of this...a deep and wounding piece...hopefully it will help you heal. "
Posted by Narcissa on "Godsent Goodbye." by Aleas
- "I've always felt a connection with your words... you captured my sentiments exactly...but I have taken one thing w/me when I leave here..."
Posted by Narcissa on "Epiphanies Lost." by Aleas
- "I call it "Heavens Peak"... ;). I agree with both guys... another piece Ill love to ponder from a talented poet. I can't stop reading this...There isn't a line here that doesn't speak to me on a personal level...and I am thrilled that the picture spoke to you as it did me."
Posted by Narcissa on "Undaunted, Unwanted, and Regrettably Unnoticed." by Aleas
- "In the last stanza I felt that everything depends in that one breath...since at any given moment anything can happen...You have my chest tied in knots."
Posted by Narcissa on "Please; Don't." by Aleas
- "I agree w/After Hours...I was so lost in the romance, the love that I lost it when I read the end...Never let moments like this slip. Never."
Posted by Narcissa on "Of You." by Aleas
