Comments by MESUN
- "in a sorrowful way that was very beautiful. from this i'm sure the pen will be more on paper than you, which makes me see a lot more possibility. welcome to dp, hope ya stick around."
Posted by MESUN on "Tainted" by Celeste0224
- "I get a pain when I am reminded of my past sorrows. But that is what poetry should do. It should move the reader, which this did. I'm glad you shared your thoughts, and I hope things get better for you."
Posted by MESUN on "Enjoy your perfect life..." by Angelic Demon
- "I'm going with monkey on this one. It does remind me of Darko. it's like one of those simple processes of thought you have when everything around you is still."
Posted by MESUN on "stupify" by insideout
- "Now that, was fucking awesome! That freaking took the feelings The Pit and the Pendulum and fucking beefed 'em up tenfold. I read that and I was actually able to taste the fear. Beautifully done."
Posted by MESUN on "Rein of Terror ...Part 1" by RubyXero
- "HOLY FUCKING SHIT!! amen, amen, amen. The people you described made me really question the whole idea of being a christian as i grew. then i realized, they're the ones fucked up, not me. so i keep to my beliefs and i keep my eyes and ears open still. just fucking great."
Posted by MESUN on "Bad religion..." by j-rod
- "Very Poe-ish. at least to me anyway. Something bout that whole "i don't understand what i'm reading but as a whole it somehow makes sense" sorta thing. weird, i always like that sorta thing even though it drives me nuts. nice job."
Posted by MESUN on "Shadowed by Words" by RubyXero
- "ya know, usually when i'm home, after a hard night at work, enjoying my beer, a buzzkill would piss me off. but this stirs my emotions in a way that i can't help but feel the truth in the course of things. the proof that i'm not the only one "drinking alone". cheers to better times (that better be ginger ale missy)"
Posted by MESUN on "Fade Out" by RubyXero
- "word up. right back at you too. i love it when i see someone remember and acknowledge the fact that this is made of everyone and not just the cliques. sometimes i think appreciation gets pushed aside for those not "exalted" here. this is one way to give it to the deserving though. if they haven't been discouraged enough not to be able to find this at least that is. i'm rambling. great piece."
Posted by MESUN on "For Every Single Poet" by RubyXero
- "I find myself looking back often to times better than now. I think things only get harder because we have more on our plates to deal with as we get older. As for those joyous things I feel they aren't dragged away, but they merely fade from our presence. The best we can hope for is to create little happy moments to battle the overwhelming grief that is life. In then end, oh well, keep rolling."
Posted by MESUN on "Take My Hand" by RubyXero
- "quite a beautiful write. made me very nostalgic for such brief moments as this in my past. with bittersweet intent though i shall let them go and look to future ones. nicely done."
Posted by MESUN on "I want you to lay still" by Taunting The Reaper
- "well you sure are going through a field of razor-wire aren't you? i believe you are fully capable of handling all this in the long run. be strong, plan things knowing your own actions and abilities are what's for certain. do that, and vain questions or not, you'll be fine. "
Posted by MESUN on "Wayward Child" by RubyXero
- "fucking a. i loved the line "tales and warnings flee the lips and crawl into the ears" i just that the was fucking great. as i read on i felt you were talking about a vulture. the feeling of being in the desert and the buzzards circling over head and a soon to come death was what i got from this piece. excellent stuff. carry on."
Posted by MESUN on "Silent Stalker" by RubyXero
- "word fucking up brother. that sure paints a pretty picture of where we're heading. land of the free indeed. at least they let us hold on to our speech, just part of the tactic though. just wait till that goes. excellent write."
Posted by MESUN on "Cities of Gold" by Taunting The Reaper
- "What a thing fate is that I should be going through such a similar situation as this when I stumble upon it. I certainly am praying for strength. Excellent piece, this definitely demonstrated that truth is beauty."
Posted by MESUN on "Let Me Be Strong Enough" by Shewolf
- "a lot of stuff going on here. i feel kinda of pointless cause i don't really know what to say. don't forget our struggles are there to make us stronger."
Posted by MESUN on "Embrace to Heartache" by RubyXero
- "oh beautiful! excellent. i have a lingering taste of sugar and amaretto from reading this. loved the grouping of onyx, sorrow, and trust. this seems to be proof that the sun is always shining somewhere."
Posted by MESUN on "Everlasting" by RubyXero
- "dig the darkness. always able to relate with this tone i guess. i liked the rhythm i felt there was. march on."
Posted by MESUN on "Sickness" by RubyXero
- "word up. inner strength from the deviance of the public majority's approved social norms. strength in the individual, despite the ragged appearance. boofuckingya. your life is your's, damn all who criticize you. it's always good to see someone on their feet. keep on moving."
Posted by MESUN on "A Lone Night" by RubyXero
- "I felt anxious as i read this. At first I wondered if this is what a deer thinks while looking into headlights, then I remembered how I felt when choosing which parent to live with when I was younger. A stirring of emotions was definitely achieved by this piece."
Posted by MESUN on "Wall of Arrows" by Silence
- "i think you write with a quill ripped from an angel's wings. this piece reminds me of this thing i read one time. i think it's called My Paintbrush. if i remember correct it had the same idea of covering up to hide. excellence."
Posted by MESUN on "Paper Mask//Mirrored Lies" by Err0r
- "damn it, god fucking damn it. you, you pierce my heart with the things i already know but am to afraid to keep telling myself. or are you just saying the things every one keeps tucked away, silent and gagged, in the backs of their minds?"
Posted by MESUN on "Patience- A Virtue Unwanted" by Err0r
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