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Patience- A Virtue Unwanted
By Err0r
"Be Patient."
If I rush too fast
I could drop my thought...
If I go too slow
I could lose my spot...
If I cut in line
I could get thrown out...
If I wait my turn
I could gain more doubt...
If I dive into love
I could hit jagged rocks...
If I fall into you
I could drown at the docks...
If I tell you how I feel
I could suffer in pain...
If I lie about my heart
I could burn in vain...
If I...
I could...
If I...
I would.
If you...
With Me...
If you...
Could see...
Just exactly
What I could be.
If I...
[Take A Chance...]
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© 2007 Err0r
Comments on "Patience- A Virtue Unwanted"
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On Saturday, October 13, 2007, MESUN
(230)
wrote:
damn it, god fucking damn it. you, you pierce my heart with the things i already know but am to afraid to keep telling myself. or are you just saying the things every one keeps tucked away, silent and gagged, in the backs of their minds?
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A former member wrote:
You should
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A former member wrote:
loved it. I just loved it. ~Silver~
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On Wednesday, July 25, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I cant wait for you to post your master pieces!
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A former member wrote:
This is very beautiful. I can see and feel it in my heart as I read thru the words. Its so hard to put yourself out there...thanks for the welcome. I look forward to reading more and becoming apart of dp!
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On Monday, July 16, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
I love the ending...what a statement. You are stunning.
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A former member wrote:
wow, damn good..
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Magnificent =) The interplay of lines was brilliant and the message wonderful. Thoroughly enjoyed this. -Carl
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, veingo
(533) wrote:
Wonderful, Brit. I loved it. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
Fuck fear...dig this.
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A former member wrote:
lol...i thought this was great, exactly what i had to say...or did not say but was thinking of saying...you know what i mean...like u said.."if i could, i would"
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, Army Barbie
(324) wrote:
Oh you loser. I thought it was gonna be something I could laugh my ass off at.
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On Sunday, July 15, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
haha. =P
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A former member wrote:
The chances I remember taking are the ones that didn't turn out. The others are so obviously right in retrospect I forget I took a chance at the time. I'm impatient tho so lots of chances! Good write about the possibilities
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A former member wrote:
oooooh...chances, are moments that we are MEANT to either take and see where life leads from them, or let fall into oblivion and never know what might have happened otherwise. Always take the chance; you can't regret that way. Excellent. ~*Beth*~
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