Let Me Be Strong Enough

By Shewolf

Am I strong enough?
I am so unsure that my heart can take the torment
Of loving you.
I have never been
Pretty enough
Thin enough
Feminine enough
Soft enough
For those who have passed through my life
Yet I have always been
Strong enough
Until now…..
I laid my Heart in your hands
As gently
As a Mother cradles a Newborn
And you took it
Just as......gently
I dread the day
When you find me Imperfect
And slip away from me
As easily as a deer
traverses the forest
Leaving my heart
Cold and lifeless once more.
Please!
Great Spirit which moves through all things
I beg of You
Let me be strong enough……

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© 2006 Shewolf
Published on Friday, February 10, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • MESUN On Saturday, December 22, 2007, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    What a thing fate is that I should be going through such a similar situation as this when I stumble upon it. I certainly am praying for strength. Excellent piece, this definitely demonstrated that truth is beauty.

  • veingo On Sunday, February 12, 2006, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    I've never felt like I'm enough of anything, to anyone. I know how it feels. Well done. ^V^

  • A former member wrote: I Love this nice work...

  • whisperer On Friday, February 10, 2006, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    this one beats to the same drum as my soul and i can feel my heart nodding in ascent.....i love it

  • Alanarchy On Friday, February 10, 2006, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    I liked this. Eloquent. And has almost a prayer, or chanting aspect to it. nice.

  • Dissolving Poet On Friday, February 10, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    I again with Tainted*sighs* it was beautifully sad and sorrowful and all women I believe feel that at some point

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, February 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    "Pretty enough/Thin enough/Feminine enough/Soft enough/For those who have passed through my life/Yet I have always been/Strong enough" I wish I could tell you how much this piece cut through me with the dullest blade...

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, February 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    so many times I've said those exact words to myself. Thank you for this. I can't tell you how much it means. ♥Julia~

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