Comments by All Members
- "Mmm.. Who doesn't love taking out the trash.. "Forgiving the unforgivable" this is powerful Robyn. Awesome write! I love you doll. Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "exhale" by Nehema
- "Nice!! Are you getting your rhyme scheme down to a t or what? lil dick. lol love you .."
Posted by Devilish on "exhale" by Nehema
- "Nice N, I wish I could do just what you said. Starting over is hard 'n heavy, but so well worth it. That was a nice one. Sweet. Til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "exhale" by Nehema
- "I really love this !! To start anew! Refreshing write, my dear ;)~"
Posted by blue angel on "exhale" by Nehema
- "'Forgiving the unforgivable, retrieving meaning for the grieving
" I loved those last lines... beautifully written, and very unique structure :) xoxo"
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "exhale" by Nehema
- "Very awesome..I like the way you structured this; this style, where each stanza can stand alone, but also goes together with the others as a whole-you pulled it off nicely. Haven't seen this type of poem in awhile...those last words, "retrieving meaning for the grieving", have an awesome rhyme...interesting and deep, to be so short; great post!
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "exhale" by Nehema
- "smoke rings rise with the fall of your chest..inside the case of a magicians box waiting to be severed in half. I know this feeling. A gritty existence you were born into, a victim of circumstance that never had a choice. I love this... It's honest, sad and biting. But it's also accepting, and in that acceptance you find your own individuality that can't be properly compared to someone else. Awesome man."
Posted by Unknown on "Fate... feat ~Devilish~" by Nehema
- "From two of the best, of course it's gonna be awesome. Excellent collab both of you. You should do them more often. Excellent piece. Til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Fate... feat ~Devilish~" by Nehema
- "Nice one N. The love for the gun is always strong. Some times more than others. Awesome. Til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Colt 45 1911" by Nehema
- "Gives me chills, and Brought the edge of a tear to my eye. Well written, as always."
Posted by Aleator on "Good Girl" by Nehema
- "Super cool collaboration, you two ;)
"I escape into the fumes leaving the rest to fill the room whole heartedly consumed. " nice visuals too;)~ ~^_^~ xxx"
Posted by blue angel on "Fate... feat ~Devilish~" by Nehema
- "It's always an honor and a pleasure to write with you. I believe this was the fastest collab I've ever completed, and the best - like the title says, it must have been fate. Love you HUGE - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Fate... feat ~Devilish~" by Nehema
- "If the glove don't fit then you must acquit! This was a proud pronouncement of spell-breaking, bone crunching, superiority that leaves the reader pecking in the dirt like so many chickens. Pluck me, please, cheers ladies!!"
Posted by dwells on "Fate... feat ~Devilish~" by Nehema
- "yet i fit like a glove to your..
level above.. ... Yeah ya do, its fate :) mmmm beautiful ladies.. And the winner is... :) awesome collab"
Posted by MissAngelic on "Fate... feat ~Devilish~" by Nehema
- "Ok i am going to stroke my own ego right now. if i hadn't already posted i would of took the glory for this one on my page.. lol. this is beautiful. i believe the best collab i've been a part of really.. it fits perfectly with the time the place the notion the feel and the win.. bows, "
Posted by Devilish on "Fate... feat ~Devilish~" by Nehema
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