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  • "the balance between prose and trope... a weaving of heart and sign... the fuckin series is a potd... wish you were around poet."
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "she spoke silver" by Six-Out
  • "i believe you have showed me this poem before. if not, i would like to say how beautiful i think it is. it has such a familiar feel to it. i felt like i was in a trance reading it. love it."
    Posted by dying angel on "heart.cage capacity." by Six-Out
  • "I just can't ever stop reading this and feeling that urge that I am reaching in vain for something that I have only idealized. Sorry how things went down...you are still one of the best poets to ever bless this place"
    Posted by Ravenblade on "of photographs and static-filled skies." by Six-Out
  • "such a cold tone wrapped in pensive hyperbole and extended tropes. I like how you wove the absence of color: so many greys, whites and blacks over top of so many common romantic images and symbols... the inversion that takes place in that first paragraph unleashes both dreams and color themes with blood-grey rain, something to believe in from above... and from there, the bathroom stall becomes this broken dream... I know I've spit out a prayer or two over a toilet back in the day... never what it's cracked up to be... this life we leave. *bows*"
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "bathroom.stall [graffiti]" by Six-Out
  • "ah poetry... I had almost forgotten what it sounded like... what it felt like to hear such depth of metaphor sparkle without a rhyme puncturing my ear. pardon the pun. :) poet."
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "she spoke diamond" by Six-Out
  • "holy!!!! i am always left in awe when i read your work. wow"
    Posted by Mahakala on "[tabs]" by Six-Out
  • "Which part of this wouldn't Jesus do? We've got eighteen years undocumented between him being twelve in a temple, and then thirty preaching all of a sudden... Who knows, ya know? Excellent write."
    Posted by Unknown on "what would jesus [not] do?" by Six-Out
  • "sighs...you are amazing. i love this piece. love it, love it, love it. it's tears me apart inside and makes me want to cry...but i absolutely love it. you know how talented you are...but oh, i will you again...this is so well done."
    Posted by Northstar on "myths need mystery [we're all liars]" by Six-Out
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