Comments by All Members
- "Is it me or this work grows darker and darker as the end approaches? The cold petrified image turns... Astonishing."
Posted by Nimue44 on "european wood" by jaunty pill
- "this is one of those poems that stands out as excellent, to me. i don't feel like describing the how or why, i'll just say: thank you for writing this and sharing it."
Posted by Jonas on "follow puberty" by jaunty pill
- "I remember coming across an old book of photo's of the American Indians that reminds me of this - those proud stoic faces creased yet with defeat and terrible tragedy - such sad eyes...terribly sad eyes...thanks"
Posted by Solace on "follow puberty" by jaunty pill
- "I like that first sharp sting of cowardice - you come to the ugliness of the world in humiliation and so we should, I think...strangely this has its own beauty, as do the tragic faces of those poor girls - its always the faces..."
Posted by Solace on "follow puberty" by jaunty pill
- "This made me think of a discrete gangster on the edge of insanity, loving someone too much for his own good-thus disposing of it. I liked it. I like your choice of words and the way you assemble them. Almost like a puzzle, you have all the right pieces an"
Posted by Unknown on "anything less" by jaunty pill
- "Dear lord, the quake of mythos - the stare of landscape - macrocosmic principles collide and collude to create a magnificent heart drenched piece of perfect artistry...Divinity has graced this page..."
Posted by Solace on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- "heh, I've read this quite a few times but have never left a comment mostly because I'm always just sitting here after going fuck.... amazingly vivid write, vulgar, crass and real. rocks my fucking socks. thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on "nice cunt" by jaunty pill
- "egawd.what the fuck can i say?...theres so much i could quote,lines that ran right thru---but they all work so wonderful together, creating the entire intensity of [yet another] work of brilliance from you."
Posted by AniDayz on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- "this poem is very unique, and conveyed in a style unlike any i have seen. this is some great writing you have here. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "european wood" by jaunty pill
- "uniqueness abounds...and im hammered down...my heads all warped,eyes transfixed---youre fucking out of this world man. juat brilliant."
Posted by AniDayz on "european wood" by jaunty pill
- "You are quite a rampantly creative poet. You'll have to be chained to my favorites list, where you belong!"
Posted by stormtalk on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- ".."her drum
loud like
a pumpkin
bashed
on tin".. I've already expressed my thoughts of your brilliance.. Now I'm missing your voice."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- ""if you are to die take a place
in the distance where green fields
soak the earth in sun" . . absolutely magnificent.
"
Posted by Unknown on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- "This is why you are one of my favorites. So abstract and full of meaning, so beautifully carved out of a thousand fairytales-depicting the reality of us humans. I don't know what to say, I'm stunned. "
Posted by Unknown on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- "like an enormous drill bit.. twisting, and scraping it's way toward new meaning. i'm sorely impressed ~db~"
Posted by birdwell on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- "
There you are. :) I was beginning to think that you might have forgotten about my little side of the island. *Hugs tightly* Send me an e-mail sometime. I'd love to hear how you've been. :) And thank you. I am all red to be compared to Dali. LOL."
Posted by jaunty pill on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
- "surreal and yet tangible, in imagery lateral and fascinating...like Dali through the mirror almost... I can't explain myself, dammit. >:( Anyway, damn fine write, despite my inability to clarify why. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
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I don't know how I missed your comment. :( You are so kind and I can tell that you are also a thoughtful reader. I also find it hard sometimes to tie into a poem , Glad to see that this one could do that for you. Rare moment indeed. Hugs."
Posted by jaunty pill on "about your beauty" by jaunty pill
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Thanks for always being a faithful reader Kiss. Everytime you stop in to something I do , I just feel all warm all over. Hugs."
Posted by jaunty pill on "apple mouth" by jaunty pill
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