a faint smile so vivid blue
By jaunty pill
.
sad personalities
drove composure
into gaunt
armpits and
they listened to
the backward
seraphina phlegm:
rof eht elpoep ve'ew dellik
dna tsol gnola eht yaw
ew did ti tuo fo deerg
tuo fo etips
egnever
snoitpo ereh
era enon
esuac ve'ew
tsol emit
) tsil su sa
rehtona melborp (
ew dluohs evah tfel
sraey erofeb
ro ta tsael edam emos
htaed taerht
ot ruo nwo enihcam
ecno niaga rof eht
elpoep ve'ew edllik
ti saw lla ew dluoc od
ot peek morf gnimaercs
er'ew yrros
ew did ti tuo fo niap
tuo fo suineg
tsul
( the translation
when years
of novocaine
relax ):
for the people we've killed
and lost along the way
we did it out of greed
out of spite
revenge
options here
are none
cause we've
lost time
( list us as
another problem )
we should have left
years before
or at least made some
death threat
to our own machine
once again for the
people we've killed
it was all we could do
to keep from screaming
we're sorry
we did it out of pain
out of genius
lust
( I wonder
if aggressive
derangement
can be held
like a
stork bird
with a
broken
leg )
..
Comments on "a faint smile so vivid blue"
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On Friday, May 5, 2006, waterchica999
(29) wrote:
This is very talented work
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A former member wrote:
Oh...this is.....just....breathtaking. Diviana
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
the picture also adds such a panging touch---very nicely put together--all of this...you have talent that is unlike any other---and it blows my mind.
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
.:completely amazaed:.i fully loved the creativeness of this, and the message---it all reads so damn wonderful, backward or forward...is htere a message in that? cause i see one.
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
damnit i went through reading everything backward even after i had scrolled down and saw all that....i'm so retarded. but i loved it all the same. first thing i've read in days and i LOVE it.
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A former member wrote:
Ohhhhh...another wonderful work, I don't know what to say.
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
wow.... this completely blows my mind..... amazing and vivid write. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
i love this! very creative and abstract (both the poem and art)