apple mouth

By jaunty pill

behind the wheel
I festered
both hands
sly to the road

you held tight
like cold shanties
banished
through the
breeze

eagle flew there
so soft
nestled in
a warm hug
no virtue
at all on your
trousers

I told the
sky
not to dock
in your
shade
and it was
wrong to
do

( handsome
men did zilch
for the hard
pluck
of nipples )

drink from
the womb
sperm as big
as theory

climb up
the boil
onto
hospice
sheets

but don't
stare
at the moth
cocooned
from
my
mouth

.

flies
sting

gentle
merchants
with
enigma
flesh

remember
dora
her drum
loud like
a pumpkin
bashed
on tin

even her
undertones of
wavy stigma

remember
her skin
red like
blood

like a scab
of nerves

.

above
the doctors bolo
your body is
little more than a
soft bag
from which
organs
live

both palms
are frozen
meat
abstract
in thick
muscle

( if a razor
was a
peel of land
we would
suture
wounds )

dark imperilments
were
have always
been
recurrent

dreams
become stone
sooty with
potential

and around
your shoulder
cupid
puts a glove of
antibiotics

no
thought
able to
stay

.

I've evaluated
alcohol is
freedom from
age

but what
has caused
this
fizzle

if you are
to die
take a place
in the
distance

where
green fields
soak the
earth
in sun


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Copyright 2005 jaunty pill
Published on Saturday, June 18, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Solace On Monday, June 5, 2006, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Dear lord, the quake of mythos - the stare of landscape - macrocosmic principles collide and collude to create a magnificent heart drenched piece of perfect artistry...Divinity has graced this page...

  • A former member wrote: loved it purely done

  • Elegant Kiss On Tuesday, January 3, 2006, Elegant Kiss (178)By person wrote:

    You're missed something awful. Come back, yeah?

  • A former member wrote: this..flowed absolutely beautifully. amazing.

  • AniDayz On Saturday, August 27, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    egawd.what the fuck can i say?...theres so much i could quote,lines that ran right thru---but they all work so wonderful together, creating the entire intensity of [yet another] work of brilliance from you.

  • stormtalk On Saturday, July 30, 2005, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    You are quite a rampantly creative poet. You'll have to be chained to my favorites list, where you belong!

  • Elegant Kiss On Friday, July 29, 2005, Elegant Kiss (178)By person wrote:

    .."her drum loud like a pumpkin bashed on tin".. I've already expressed my thoughts of your brilliance.. Now I'm missing your voice.

  • A former member wrote: "if you are to die take a place in the distance where green fields soak the earth in sun" . . absolutely magnificent.

  • A former member wrote: This is why you are one of my favorites. So abstract and full of meaning, so beautifully carved out of a thousand fairytales-depicting the reality of us humans. I don't know what to say, I'm stunned.

  • birdwell On Sunday, June 19, 2005, birdwell (138)By person wrote:

    like an enormous drill bit.. twisting, and scraping it's way toward new meaning. i'm sorely impressed ~db~

  • purr_verse On Saturday, June 18, 2005, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    surreal and yet tangible, in imagery lateral and fascinating...like Dali through the mirror almost... I can't explain myself, dammit. >:( Anyway, damn fine write, despite my inability to clarify why. :)

  • jaunty pill On Saturday, June 18, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    There you are. :) I was beginning to think that you might have forgotten about my little side of the island. *Hugs tightly* Send me an e-mail sometime. I'd love to hear how you've been. :) And thank you. I am all red to be compared to Dali. LOL.

  • Elegant Kiss On Saturday, June 18, 2005, Elegant Kiss (178)By person wrote:

    .."I told the sky not to dock in your shade and it was wrong to do" Have I told you that you're brilliant? Thank you for this.

  • jaunty pill On Saturday, June 18, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    Thanks for always being a faithful reader Kiss. Everytime you stop in to something I do , I just feel all warm all over. Hugs.

  • Serenity On Saturday, June 18, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    My word were stolen from me. Beyond amazing.

  • jaunty pill On Saturday, June 18, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    Thank you Serenity. I appreciate it. I do. :)

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