apple mouth
By jaunty pill
behind the wheel
I festered
both hands
sly to the road
you held tight
like cold shanties
banished
through the
breeze
eagle flew there
so soft
nestled in
a warm hug
no virtue
at all on your
trousers
I told the
sky
not to dock
in your
shade
and it was
wrong to
do
( handsome
men did zilch
for the hard
pluck
of nipples )
drink from
the womb
sperm as big
as theory
climb up
the boil
onto
hospice
sheets
but don't
stare
at the moth
cocooned
from
my
mouth
.
flies
sting
gentle
merchants
with
enigma
flesh
remember
dora
her drum
loud like
a pumpkin
bashed
on tin
even her
undertones of
wavy stigma
remember
her skin
red like
blood
like a scab
of nerves
.
above
the doctors bolo
your body is
little more than a
soft bag
from which
organs
live
both palms
are frozen
meat
abstract
in thick
muscle
( if a razor
was a
peel of land
we would
suture
wounds )
dark imperilments
were
have always
been
recurrent
dreams
become stone
sooty with
potential
and around
your shoulder
cupid
puts a glove of
antibiotics
no
thought
able to
stay
.
I've evaluated
alcohol is
freedom from
age
but what
has caused
this
fizzle
if you are
to die
take a place
in the
distance
where
green fields
soak the
earth
in sun
Comments on "apple mouth"
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On Monday, June 5, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Dear lord, the quake of mythos - the stare of landscape - macrocosmic principles collide and collude to create a magnificent heart drenched piece of perfect artistry...Divinity has graced this page...
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A former member wrote:
loved it purely done
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On Tuesday, January 3, 2006, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
You're missed something awful. Come back, yeah?
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A former member wrote:
this..flowed absolutely beautifully. amazing.
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
egawd.what the fuck can i say?...theres so much i could quote,lines that ran right thru---but they all work so wonderful together, creating the entire intensity of [yet another] work of brilliance from you.
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On Saturday, July 30, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
You are quite a rampantly creative poet. You'll have to be chained to my favorites list, where you belong!
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On Friday, July 29, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
.."her drum loud like a pumpkin bashed on tin".. I've already expressed my thoughts of your brilliance.. Now I'm missing your voice.
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A former member wrote:
"if you are to die take a place
in the distance where green fields
soak the earth in sun" . . absolutely magnificent.
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A former member wrote:
This is why you are one of my favorites. So abstract and full of meaning, so beautifully carved out of a thousand fairytales-depicting the reality of us humans. I don't know what to say, I'm stunned.
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On Sunday, June 19, 2005, birdwell
(138) wrote:
like an enormous drill bit.. twisting, and scraping it's way toward new meaning. i'm sorely impressed ~db~
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On Saturday, June 18, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
surreal and yet tangible, in imagery lateral and fascinating...like Dali through the mirror almost... I can't explain myself, dammit. >:( Anyway, damn fine write, despite my inability to clarify why. :)
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On Saturday, June 18, 2005, jaunty pill
(47) wrote:
There you are. :) I was beginning to think that you might have forgotten about my little side of the island. *Hugs tightly* Send me an e-mail sometime. I'd love to hear how you've been. :) And thank you. I am all red to be compared to Dali. LOL.
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On Saturday, June 18, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
.."I told the sky not to dock in your shade and it was wrong to do" Have I told you that you're brilliant? Thank you for this.
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On Saturday, June 18, 2005, jaunty pill
(47) wrote:
Thanks for always being a faithful reader Kiss. Everytime you stop in to something I do , I just feel all warm all over. Hugs.
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On Saturday, June 18, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
My word were stolen from me. Beyond amazing.
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On Saturday, June 18, 2005, jaunty pill
(47) wrote:
Thank you Serenity. I appreciate it. I do. :)