nice cunt

By jaunty pill

I am a wordsmith
not really
a remarkable man
but bendable
at the same time

I've been a
lit smoke in
an ashtray
in front of a
two-cent
hooker and I've
seen gandhi
fall from
the sky

he wore
indian slacks
with a
parachute belt
and spoke
of influence
like it
was on fire

it was then
of course
I lost my
periwinkle dust
for another
venture of cosmic
radiation
that I didn't have
to incline

yeah

I have a mighty
horse cock
with goliath
balls and
if you're
not careful
it'll spit
in your eye

go right ahead and
suck my dick and see
it ejaculate on your
face

these walls are mine
slut and I'm paying you
so you shouldn't really
say anything

your mouth
should be full
and tight
around my hardness

this blowhole
prick can't
wait to
candy coat your
mouth with
shooting
butterscotch

( though it
probably won't
taste much
like candy
I'm sure

or look like it
for the matter )

you should
know of my lust
seeing those
red high heels
trying to
trick me into
ramming you home
before I
get to suckle
those tits

I imagine
ripping your
hair out
in clumps

but that's just
thoughts
really

I'm not abusive
though if you
give me more cash
I could be

you watch
me fondle
your tight
ample ass
as I thrust
with severe
power into
your slick
pink toy

pushing through
longevity
with no doubt
I'll give
each of us
what we want

two hundred
dollar bills
hit the sheets
and I'm
not ready
for a cigar

but a nice
hot bath to
wash your
sticky love
juice off
of me

before you leave
let me just say

I've had better

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Copyright 2005 jaunty pill
Published on Thursday, March 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Beat" and "Poetry"
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  • elisa On Monday, November 20, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ... still love this.

  • Lotophagi On Saturday, December 17, 2005, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    heh, I've read this quite a few times but have never left a comment mostly because I'm always just sitting here after going fuck.... amazingly vivid write, vulgar, crass and real. rocks my fucking socks. thank you.

  • A former member wrote: when i hear the word 'wordsmith' i think of a blacksmith making things. over the course of this poem the blacksmith i picture swallows his hammer, blows it out his ass, and pounds away at molten iron with his fists

  • jaunty pill On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    It's funny how you did my harder piece first. I am not sure why the simple direction in some of my poetry , Always gets the most interesting comments. I think the effiel tower is bigger than my cock though.

  • jaunty pill On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    Blowing iron out my ass...I could have done that as well , But the prostitute really wasn't willing. Sadly. LOL. Thanks for your comment King. Most are afraid to get dirty.

  • A former member wrote: shortly after his hands finally burn off and he has no more ability to even alter the iron, he takes a dump on it then smiles like he made the fuckign eiffel tower.

  • A former member wrote: other than that the imagery was intense. but so is an aneurysm

  • Sin On Friday, March 18, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    damn this was brutal in a very warped sense of sexualtiy kinda way...and that last line was just vicious...just damn

  • AniDayz On Friday, March 18, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    shiattt...this is fucking twisted ....vulgar and lustful....did i say fucking twisted ? !....

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, March 12, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    Jesus, as Twi said, this is very effective, your last lines were awesome, wonderful.. Scholar

  • hate_doll On Saturday, March 12, 2005, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    intense. your casual brutality is aces. that's what I look for in a good write, brutality, honestym and above all, rawness. The rest will work itself out. This definitely worked out. I don't think it's mean, realistic, if anything.

  • hate_doll On Saturday, March 12, 2005, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    but all in all, amazing, I'm impressed greatly.

  • jaunty pill On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    comment removed by DP admins

  • elisa On Friday, March 11, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    you have a good sense of humor:) i agree sex is exaggerated...evolution seems to be degenerating...like wild kingdom all over again:) elisa

  • elisa On Thursday, March 10, 2005, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    comment removed by DP admins

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 10, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    ..interesting write..definately..but yea, mean...Welcome to DP

  • jaunty pill On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    Thanks " Crimson Queen " for the welcome. I have not had the pleasure to read any of your works yet...I will do that right now. Thanks so much for reading one of my raw writes.

  • The Crimson Queen On Thursday, March 10, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    well i hope you enjoy...if not, oh well :P

  • A former member wrote: This was so mean. I liked it for the wording and it was delictably vulger, but it ended so...mean.

  • A former member wrote: Bleh, I can't tell if this is horrible because of the content or if it's just horrible because.. well, fuck.. because it's just horrible.

  • jaunty pill On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    Horrible is good to. This was certainly not meant to be pretty and it is meant to be read outloud. There is no other way to consider this piece. =)

  • A former member wrote: Mayhaps I worded it wrong. When I meant horrible - I meant not that it was shitty poetry. I meant that the content was degrading and demeaning.. I can't figure out how to express in words what I mean. My apologies.

  • Liz On Monday, March 21, 2005, Liz (267)By person wrote:

    That was my reaction as well. I want to punch the poet for thinking these things and I want to punch him again for talking incessantly about himself afterwards. And then I might concede that it was skillfully written.

  • Liz On Monday, March 21, 2005, Liz (267)By person wrote:

    But, seriously, stop gloating. Humility is one of the most impressive human characteristics. Thank us for reading and shut the hell up; it's not your place to educate, only to present.

  • A former member wrote: but your wordage was good

  • A former member wrote: wow the first part had nothing to do with the second part or though it seems um i think you tried to hard to make this sexual and mean

  • jaunty pill On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    I often write in a very powerful manner. Don't really consider boundries in what I do. If you'd like to know more about my work , Or the publishing I'm involved with , Please check out my other site..It's listed on my darkpoetry page. =)

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