follow puberty
By jaunty pill
a barred form
of tension
brings the coward
to diseased
fleshy thighs
holding onto
thoughts
of a young
thousand stolen
virgins
three years later
the witness protection
agency bum is
looking at internet
porn from japan
little girls with
the softest cherry
you've ever seen
.....
his moms got urine
pissing off her legs
to the floor
tonight he says
she's aged
but
father said
that was crazy
at local religion
when you look at
the puberty
in chinese women
you don't always know
when they've lost
needs to
follow
especially when
they pull up their
wedding gowns
for me to taste the
womb of life
tragically though
they always bleed
too much
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On Sunday, February 15, 2009, Jonas
(715) wrote:
this is one of those poems that stands out as excellent, to me. i don't feel like describing the how or why, i'll just say: thank you for writing this and sharing it.
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On Tuesday, October 24, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I like that first sharp sting of cowardice - you come to the ugliness of the world in humiliation and so we should, I think...strangely this has its own beauty, as do the tragic faces of those poor girls - its always the faces...
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On Tuesday, October 24, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I remember coming across an old book of photo's of the American Indians that reminds me of this - those proud stoic faces creased yet with defeat and terrible tragedy - such sad eyes...terribly sad eyes...thanks
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On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
ewww.... and ouch.... and wow.... this was good and shocking. just they way i like 'em
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A former member wrote:
Yikes, the truth of this is so harsh. Wonderfully described.
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On Thursday, March 10, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
this is so fucked up man...and more fucked up is the reality of this write....you have created an intense picture, a truth so fucking real it hurts....this is incredible
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A former member wrote:
umm yeah ~~GAP~~
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On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill
(47) wrote:
One of my favorite pieces. Came to me over a trip to china and japan...Where I interviewed a few prostitutes and some that had been sexually molested.