follow puberty

By jaunty pill

a barred form
of tension
brings the coward
to diseased
fleshy thighs

holding onto
thoughts
of a young
thousand stolen
virgins

three years later
the witness protection
agency bum is
looking at internet
porn from japan

little girls with
the softest cherry
you've ever seen

.....

his moms got urine
pissing off her legs
to the floor

tonight he says
she's aged
but
father said
that was crazy
at local religion

when you look at
the puberty
in chinese women
you don't always know
when they've lost
needs to
follow

especially when
they pull up their
wedding gowns
for me to taste the
womb of life

tragically though
they always bleed
too much

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Copyright 2005 jaunty pill
Published on Thursday, March 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Adult" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas On Sunday, February 15, 2009, Jonas (715)By person wrote:

    this is one of those poems that stands out as excellent, to me. i don't feel like describing the how or why, i'll just say: thank you for writing this and sharing it.

  • Solace On Tuesday, October 24, 2006, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    I like that first sharp sting of cowardice - you come to the ugliness of the world in humiliation and so we should, I think...strangely this has its own beauty, as do the tragic faces of those poor girls - its always the faces...

  • Solace On Tuesday, October 24, 2006, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    I remember coming across an old book of photo's of the American Indians that reminds me of this - those proud stoic faces creased yet with defeat and terrible tragedy - such sad eyes...terribly sad eyes...thanks

  • Rone4611 On Tuesday, December 6, 2005, Rone4611 (121)By person wrote:

    ewww.... and ouch.... and wow.... this was good and shocking. just they way i like 'em

  • A former member wrote: Yikes, the truth of this is so harsh. Wonderfully described.

  • AniDayz On Thursday, March 10, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    this is so fucked up man...and more fucked up is the reality of this write....you have created an intense picture, a truth so fucking real it hurts....this is incredible

  • A former member wrote: umm yeah ~~GAP~~

  • jaunty pill On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill (47)By person wrote:

    One of my favorite pieces. Came to me over a trip to china and japan...Where I interviewed a few prostitutes and some that had been sexually molested.

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