european wood

By jaunty pill




( she sat with
one nylon
pulled past
her knee

the sight of a rose
on an
indented thigh
shocked
the breeze

it was
the color
of a broke
tattoo )

a cold
winter storm
pulled at
the cramp

on sharp
european wood
she blossomed
in front
of a murderer
eye
black as the
sting in
lucifers lip

dark pools of
featureless stains
flooded
her retinas

again
a womans
hope
was drawn
crimson

( an american
tale left
the woods
on a shard
of death

and a
crowd of
dingos )





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Copyright 2005 jaunty pill
Published on Saturday, June 4, 2005.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • Nimue44 On Wednesday, January 28, 2015, Nimue44 (289)By person wrote:

    Is it me or this work grows darker and darker as the end approaches? The cold petrified image turns... Astonishing.

  • Mari On Thursday, June 15, 2006, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    a womans hope a womans love a womans breast its all about women isnt it

  • A former member wrote: this poem is very unique, and conveyed in a style unlike any i have seen. this is some great writing you have here. ....-samone

  • AniDayz On Saturday, August 27, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    *just

  • AniDayz On Saturday, August 27, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    uniqueness abounds...and im hammered down...my heads all warped,eyes transfixed---youre fucking out of this world man. juat brilliant.

  • Elegant Kiss On Sunday, June 5, 2005, Elegant Kiss (178)By person wrote:

    You have no idea how happy I am to see something new from you. You never disappoint.. Your wording stays original and full of depth. " it was the color of a broke tattoo" gah.. I'm in love with that line.

  • A former member wrote: I have been anticipating something new as well. Lovely as the rest.

  • doll on the rag On Saturday, June 4, 2005, doll on the rag (200)By person wrote:

    "black as the sting in lucifer's lip" ...gorgeous.

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