Comments by All Members
- "I had to stop reading this twice so I could gather and recompose myself. For a reason not made known I thank you for the wonderful pain of memories I've hidden from."
Posted by Unknown on "She was Life. I was Living. " by Dei
- "How righteous this is in a sense of self sacrifice.. Love can be a fickle thing but you wrote it beautifully."
Posted by Unknown on "Matchstick" by Dei
- "I realized what it was... right before the authors note... "mama" gave it away... (it took me that long...)
very well done, Loved reading this :)"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "She was Life. I was Living. " by Dei
- "Self-sacrifice on a hope seems to be a setup for inevitable disappointment maybe, best of luck and all-consuming."
Posted by dwells on "Matchstick" by Dei
- "honor suicide? for a cause... for love... always a sacrificial offering... a burnt offering... such that the cold of its once-embers always haunts with a chill that the next soaked soul tries to incinerate but never will. This brings a tantalizing touch that leaves blisters before the match.... strikes. *bows*"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Matchstick" by Dei
- "Wow.. i had no idea your poetry was so intense, strategic and pretty much flawless.. borderline brilliant. i love your analogy your candor and your delivery.. i'm impressed.. lol. wow."
Posted by Devilish on "Exhaled Exultations" by Dei
- "on great eloquence much depends, simple words more warming than a blanket, and their absense more chilling than ice"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Exhaled Exultations" by Dei
- "Keeping it overly-simple perhaps, because sometimes simpler is better, but not all the time. Eventually the knuckle-dragging cave man will surface and single words will turn into physical blows, or maybe only rejection without expression or confession. Not a good partner for a poet I'd guess? Well done Natelle!"
Posted by dwells on "Exhaled Exultations" by Dei
- "I love that your poetry feels like it should be read slow, and emphasized in certain points that you seem to break off so as to draw attention to them. Some very nice lines that were pleasant to see and screamed in my mind as beautiful as literature may ever be...thank you for sharing."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Some Sort of Lovely (revised)" by Dei
- "I can't begin to find words for this, but if I had to I would say that this flowed nicely, and the pictures you paint with your words feel almost at peace until you twist it away at the end. Your yin should have yanged..."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "The last stanza is beatiful, sounds like the one that this is about did a lot of drinking and left you to deal with the consequences? Parent or Husband, or Significant other?"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "Tremendous metaphor with the telescope and the empty drink glass! Love to dig my toes in the sandy bottom when I go clamming. Enjoyed this piece on several levels, thanks Natelle!"
Posted by dwells on "Sea Salt" by Dei
- "I enjoy your mocking of Newton and the quote "some other F-word." "
Posted by Unknown on "Adayr." by Dei
- "I love how you wrote this... the words and cadence is different, but the feeling is too familiar... some times i feel like teh only thing i write is similar poems, over and over... its good to see someoen elses words on it :)"
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Amantes Sunt Amentes" by Dei
- ""I would give you a map of where all the landmines on my property were, and part the razor wire so you could join me behind the treeline. I don't care if I ever see any of them again, but I could stare into your eyes for a long time. It's safe here, back behind the treeline. Can you hear me calling to you from across the river? Please come, hurry. There's not much time. The snipers will be back at their posts soon, and crossing will be risky. Please hurry to my heart..."
~Henry Rollins. "
Posted by Unknown on "An Effort At Prose" by Dei
- "wow.. have to repeat Brandii, breathtakingly beautiful... Absolutely marvelous piece of work.. You have amazing talent!.. wow."
Posted by Unknown on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
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