Comments by All Members
- "YEAH, i swear to god... im embarrassed to say that i actually had never heard of this song until i posted this. redeekulooos"
Posted by Dei on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "Perhaps rainbow in the dark could be replaced with something less...Ronny James Dio? I'm teasing, that was a really fantastic poem and I enjoyed reading it. Imagery was powerful "
Posted by Unknown on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "I like the ideas in this...especially "your aura burnt brilliantly / leaving pretty bones". The first haiku/stanza was my favorite. Neat work!"
Posted by Unknown on "Char. -Haiku" by Dei
- "sometimes there are sharks in the wishing well, they like to swim up beneath you and bite you in the ass. lol lovely imagery and flow."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "wonderful poem :) I like most how the tone is dark but playful, and how it wraps up at the end with a powerful impact leaving the reader feeling satisfied. 10/10!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
- ""I tried drowning in a wishing well" such a powerful line, I love it! beautiful piece my dear, so so much longing here! 10/10"
Posted by Unknown on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "powerful, and powerfully leaving me longingly wanting to embrace thee, a hug that fits most comfortably. "
Posted by Unknown on "Scent." by Dei
- "I'm so many things but mostly I'm an addict and a whore and your works are my drug. Your words are like a muse to my most inner thoughts, get out of my head."
Posted by Alchemist on "My name is Perfection." by Dei
- "Rainbows in the dark sounds quite steamy - water vapor rising with its warmth, in the cool night air, and only the moonbeams to split the color spectrum, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "And who could argue, and who could deny that which comes unanounced, to grasp it completely - and jealousy guard it. Cheers AD!"
Posted by dwells on "My name is Perfection." by Dei
- "it's as though the relationship is at a point where wishes are needed to ressurect the fun('magic'). very pleasant wording used for such a heavy subject. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "Immediately I thought of the iconic (in some circles) keyboard riff in the Dio song! You know, at the end of the rainbow, all the wealth will be worthless by then...might as well have some fun while you're at it...chasing the wishes, magic, & dollars. Good write for the soul, AD."
Posted by Unknown on "rainbows in the dark. " by Dei
- "inspiration in the looking glass? that opening line was captivating... the image, the metaphor... the icy queen, as it were, the frozen maiden fair and waiting... I see a kissed awakening within... this love that tired minds grope for in the dark. And does not apathy linger in the alone? And who would not stare at perfection, if such a glimpse could be gleamed in a reflection of what could have been? and all our voices have grown hoarse trying to live poetically. very much enjoyed the internal workings of this creative envisioning. thank you, ms star of the gods.... *curtsies*"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "My name is Perfection." by Dei
- "now if that wasn't intense and in your face at the conclusion....unexpected to say the least....this is a bittersweet picture you painted using slightly molded pastels on a chipper canvas.....thanks...-s_o"
Posted by Unknown on "Scent." by Dei
- "the harsh ending is like a brick wall... very well thought out. great write..."
Posted by Unknown on "Scent." by Dei
- "Brilliance. Deep meaning unraveling with such elegant words and meaningful descriptions/ illustrations cast upon my mind. Cheers you two. You better write some more together, this was just magnificent! ;) "
Posted by Symbol on "The Invention of Goodbye" by Dei
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