Comments by All Members
- "Man you rocked this from start to finish. What an awesome concept and delivery. Your word play here kept light and fun the reality of demise. Very nicely done!"
Posted by Dilated View on "recluse" by swing_the_hammer
- "I've no idea how I managed to stumble upon this...a random flurry of lag driven button pushing, and bam-random poem. Might as well read it, huh? This was absolutely amazing. I love the driving force behind your rhyme that leads to a conclusion that slaps you in the face. Awesome, awesome."
Posted by thyyic on "-so you tell her you mister- and let her be amiss-" by swing_the_hammer
- "This is so honest. It's entirely impressive. You show the pain of good bye like it's as broad as daylight. I really like this!"
Posted by Unknown on "gwk" by swing_the_hammer
- "This rocks! I am pleased to have come across your works by chance, only because a soldier I know named Jack Hammer, the hammer swings. I love it."
Posted by lovechild on "up and adam" by swing_the_hammer
- "I've been here before. When all you can feel and all that strikes you is the desire to recapture a time that was perfect, but you're so afraid that bringing them back will destroy you all the more, because it is all you can do to keep yourself from seeking their comfort."
Posted by Hands_Around_My_Throat on "gwk" by swing_the_hammer
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