spring (heart)break

By swing_the_hammer

she grabbed the stars
and threw them like confetti
into his heart
where they lodged,
and faded and fell apart
she left him lying in the dark,
but she knows she can't stop this
now that it's started...

she suffers from guilt
he can't understand
how she touches the moon
when she reaches her hand
skyward, she's hellbent
on getting some assurance,
some reassurance, someplace to land
and he still thinks she's heaven-sent

well, it gave him quite a start
when he witnessed
the beating of her heart
now he smiles,
and glows and falls apart
and constellations of stars
all shook in his arms
while they were lying...
(was it a lie?) with the dark skies
with dark hearts with the

cosmos shaking

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Copyright 2004 swing_the_hammer
Published on Monday, December 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • 10 Forty Three On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    WOW. THAT was AMAZING! And I always do enjoy present tense. Can't wait to read more. Congrats on a brilliant write!

  • PoetessDarkly On Tuesday, January 1, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    awesome pen well deserving the poem of the day.

  • A former member wrote: I loved the first line where she threw the stars like confetti...excellent...sooooooo goood.

  • AniDayz On Friday, April 29, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    ahhh this is *amazing*'she grabbed the stars and threw them like confetti...'~~what a way to start out this brillinat+moving piece. excellent[!]

  • Sin On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this had some amazing imagery and was so bittersweet it made my heart ache, lovely write ~kristy

  • A former member wrote: I enjoyed this on a very deep level as it corealates to my past love life nearly perfectly. This was beautiful.

  • BeautifulCalamity On Monday, December 20, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    this was really damn awesome, every line just fit so perfectly. . you seem to be brilliant, and quite the artist. . you paint a delicate web of pictures with your words, wow. .

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