Comments by All Members
- "A loosely rhymed and longing look to the North. A feeling of unrequited unavailability perhaps. Nicely done QT and sweet dreams - cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Dream Eaters" by quantummysticist18
- "Oh QTM - your paired couplets were superbly fashioned and the rhymes lent to some very unique and mystical metaphors. This was so good that I had to go back and see where I was. Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Without You Here" by quantummysticist18
- "I really like the concept of this, it's well written and uses very creative lines. I specifically liked the line, "The blinding light captured by a watch is refracted into a rainbow upon the wall of dreams." In total, this was a good write."
Posted by Noel Haiasi on "Chronometric Prophecy" by quantummysticist18
- "Great piece! I especially enjoyed the line "humanity is a private club into which I am no longer allowed," but, of course, liked the whole of this one. We indeed hurtle toward the end with sickening swiftness...no one can tell when we will meet the horizon, but we all will. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Graveyard (Vanishing Point)" by quantummysticist18
- "This flowed along well, like currents toward a point in the distance. Very well done! I especially liked the imagery evoked by "We’ll be swimming downriver
To find a home for the winter" in the context of your overall theme. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "The Lemming Suicides" by quantummysticist18
- "So..I adore this, but want to get off track a second..I started to read The Tale of a body thief and theres a part in where Lestat is talking about The artist Rembrandt and how Rembrandt Had sold his soul to the devil but at some point in time decided he no longer wanted to keep his end of the bargain and wanted to be in Gods graces instead so he painted people who werent so beautiful but painted them so his revealed there inner beauty giving light to the seemingly dark..in hopes of being in gods good grace again :) rambling on I do that sometimes but this reminded me of that. But again this was a stunning write beautifully penned a lot of great lines and I enjoyed it very much thanks for the read. "
Posted by River Lily on "Lucifer's Theophany" by quantummysticist18
- ""How rare a memory is peace,
But we were lambs once, and happy." And others being wolves in their sheep clothing selling the peace. Great write! It is pieces like this that inspire me to write. Although, I do say kill the ego. Any ego at all only adds to a clogged up pineal gland. A vision quest. The desert heals."
Posted by Oliver Twisted on "Idiolect" by quantummysticist18
- "What a remarkable affirmation of the power of people who seem to have no power. Ye are many, they are few. It has always seemed to me that poetry, music, literature, contribute very special power. To conclude, this poem and the events it is connected to seem like hell on earth."
Posted by Unknown on "Anarchy in Spring" by quantummysticist18
- "What an extraordinary piece! I especially loved the lines, "Dreading the moment when the door above will open,
And I will learn just what new guise
The fashion designers have brought to hell this time," which created some interesting visuals. I have been reading quite a bit of Greek mythology lately and your ability to incorporate imagery hinting back at such ancient hierarchical constructs within the framework of a dank basement is very good. I love this one! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Hades (The Basement)" by quantummysticist18
- "I'm...speechless. I often have these thoughts running through my head....and this just described how it feels. Please don't listen to the creature, and please keep writing. THank you! (^-^)"
Posted by Unknown on "​For the Suicides" by quantummysticist18
- "The title is what caught my eye, and looking at your other aptly named pieces, I'd say you have a definitive knack for it. Not only is this an incredible write, but its clearly the output of a beautiful mind."
Posted by Unknown on "Memory's Chasm (The Outside)" by quantummysticist18
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