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- ""Lost in the debris
Of your cremated being,
And you limp along
On your crippled beliefs,"...Damn...perfectly painted blackness.This trampled me. "
Posted by suicideseason on "Fractured Faith" by Zhee
- "i dont usually read through rhyme...but this was something different. the scheme of it all was hypnotic..and it pulled me together and ripped apart at the end. my nerves are all bouncy...i thank you."
Posted by Twilight on "Carnage Of The Strings" by Zhee
- ""Behind these frigid bars all I do is sit and scratch at the crusted memories of that incinerated evening…. in this medicated swoon the voices lie pacified" oh hell yeah. excruciatingly well done."
Posted by Unknown on "*~What Hides Behind Psychotic Eyes~*" by Zhee
- "damn.your too kind,and cool,and this poem is just awesome,you manage to capture so much,i admire how u put effort into this,the last verse is incredible,masterful,i cant find the right words to express my gratification and respect for you"
Posted by Anth on "~* Mutated Mirages And Slivered Reflections*~ (for Anth)" by Zhee
- "a quick write but fitting. It only takes an instant to lose hope and shatter faith- a devastating instant, to be sure. I like the way this speaks simply for what it is."
Posted by ShadowFlight on "Fractured Faith" by Zhee
- "loss and agony punishing yourself as if you'd thrown something away. an injustice here, taking responsibility for that which you can't control, something beyond your strength, yet not a weakness. Reading a lot into this, I know. Great write"
Posted by ShadowFlight on "Desert In My Eyes..." by Zhee
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