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~* Mutated Mirages And Slivered Reflections*~ (for Anth)
By Zhee
The disseminating poison courses,
Intoxicating with stench of banality,
Your splintered vision splattered
With the blood of strangled
reality.
Crucified, hangs the imprisoned fate
Putrefying
in acrid crevices of your palm,
Your stars collapse to songs of
damnation
In the tempest of a black hole calm.
Your
prismatic tears, lost in the temporal
Shattered by shards of fractured
resistance,
While you swoon in the embrace of the oblivion
That defines your obscure existence.
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/
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/
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Wield the quantum of dimensions
Calibrating blinded
vision – the arcane sense of verity
Awaiting an astronomical slip…
Within realms of mutated mirages where slivered reflections –
Wither like a crumpled paper mobius strip….
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Sunday, November 28, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "~* Mutated Mirages And Slivered Reflections*~ (for Anth)"
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A former member wrote:
where the hell have you gone Zhee. I miss your writes.
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A former member wrote:
"Wither like a crumpled paper mobius strip…." Perfect and brilliant and written for a superb poet.
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On Wednesday, December 15, 2004, knightmirror
(426)
wrote:
what an awesome dedication to a brilliant philosophical poet...there is some amazing imagery here...although almost everyone has already told you that....great write...****-chris
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A former member wrote:
awesome, as anth has said, you capture much with this. always so intelligent and visually stimulating.
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On Wednesday, December 1, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
Zhee, have i told you before how amazing and captivating you are? every time i read you, i fall in love with your style again ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
"Your splintered vision splattered
With the blood of strangled reality. "
I love this line! I love the entire piece, who are we kiddin'? Truly wonderful.
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A former member wrote:
Zhee, the imagery is perfection, giving your exquisite poem weight and diversity .. my fascination for your work continues.. You give me hands slickened in blood. . I am sickened, yet somehow enchanted. Atmospheric..simply paramount ~ Rose
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A former member wrote:
This is... wonderful! What is it with Anth, anyway? Everybody loves this man, don't they? YOU DA MAN, Anth! ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
amazing!!!
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A former member wrote:
that was an awesome poem
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
damn.your too kind,and cool,and this poem is just awesome,you manage to capture so much,i admire how u put effort into this,the last verse is incredible,masterful,i cant find the right words to express my gratification and respect for you
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A former member wrote:
start with "Thanks Zhee for taking time for me" cuz that's what a good firend does and by the looks of this poem she'd pretty much take a bullet for you
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
whoa , this was beautiful. absolutely stunning, gorgeous imagery.
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