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So..You Killed Yourself...
By Zhee
The epitome of despair
The exasperating defeat,
Drowned in the bloody pool
Staining the barren concrete.
Reflected in bleeding eyes
Shards of broken dreams,
The abysmal emptiness within
That only pain ever redeems.
Fall like the blazing angel
The enraged heaven releases,
Let tears put out your fire
While you rest in pieces....
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Tuesday, September 21, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "So..You Killed Yourself..."
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A former member wrote:
I realize that this is an old poem, but it's magnificent. I just happened to stumble upon it, and I love that feeling in it.
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, Storm
(143)
wrote:
"While you rest in pieces..." I must say that was the best last line I've ever read. Great poem, just simply great. ~s
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
wow...another beautiful work. chalk one up for you
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, MABUS
(20) wrote:
this pulls me in and keeps me reading...which is hard to do due to my short attention span
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
Wow!! I love this - AWESOME
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
i enjoyed the last line "While you rest in pieces" great write all together~~~Grave
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
beautiful work, I love your imagery Kya
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A former member wrote:
but as a psychologist, (and poet) you yourself have learned to see so much more, because you just have to. Thanks again, Zhee! ~Shane~
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A former member wrote:
My grave marker should perhaps read 'RUST IN PIECES', as a reference to my disability & use of a wheelchair. That's all that some people see...
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A former member wrote:
heh, i agree with anth, cool work and cool title. exceptional. each stanza had vivid impact. talentedly done.
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A former member wrote:
I would use the last stanza as a tombstone marker, but not on mine...
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A former member wrote:
I'd never kill myself, but I think this would be something you might use in a tombstone. :) ~Shane~
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
nice work,and message,i really liked that first verse,great imagery and wording,cool title i think too,
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Intense indeed. wow.. this was amazing. The last stanza is wickedly worded. Very very well done.. wow. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
intense
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