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~Consorting With Madness~
By Zhee
Behold, the lunatic waltzes
Upon bloody crystalline floors,
To apocalyptic songs of delirium
That its desolate heart adores.
Dissolution, then ignites within,
Perfect swoon of vacuous embrace,
Amorphous specters dance around
Unveiling a flawlessly empty face…
Resolute, the lunatic promenades
To realms of demonic seduction,
Conversing with caustic voices
That amalgamate with destruction…
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such is the epitome of loneliness - that consorts with madness
just to feel sane….
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Tuesday, October 12, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Sunday, December 19, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428)
wrote:
the imagery is so delicately placed, it is just amazing. . the controlled chaos, the contained insanity. . its too great. .
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A former member wrote:
-I leave this with many, many, unspoken compliments ~ Rose
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A former member wrote:
Oh Wow Zhee . . . You impress me more and more . . just when I think that it is immpossible, i read another poem of yours and feel that it is more outstanding than the last. A perfect write graced with such magnificent complexity and distorted madness. I
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On Saturday, October 16, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Reminds me of asylums, sitting in solitary, rocking back and forth with a mind miles away in visions and portents all steeped in blood and horror...the perils of being alone too long, madness bleeding into sanity...
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A former member wrote:
curse your skill at rhyme! j/k, very well done Zhee
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On Wednesday, October 13, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
perfection as usual
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
nice write, enjoyabe it alot.~~~Grave
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A former member wrote:
very good ~death~
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
hai the dance of madness and lonliness thrown together. i loved it zhee as I knew I would
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A former member wrote:
you have a style close to my own heart, i'm more impressed each time i read one of your works. the first stanza sounded like a description of myself lol. great analyzations, descriptions and the wording was spot on.
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A former member wrote:
and the ending was like the slice of a knife, cutting straight to the bone of the matter. take a bow, you've earnt it.
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A former member wrote:
mmm.. this made me feel dark and weightless.. I feel like dancing with the flow.
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On Tuesday, October 12, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
your wording has always impressed me and this is definitely no dissapointment... so true and sad at the same time... awesome work Zhee.
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