Comments by All Members
- "man, this is so tragic to me... i play the bass, and i cry at the thought of a guitar laying there all shattered and lifeless... very cool write man."
Posted by Unknown on "Carnage Of The Strings" by Zhee
- "As I have said.. I love poems on cutting.. My Mate and I both do. but I think we see it different than most.. This was beautifully worded. Well done. -Michael "
Posted by DarkWolf on "CUT!CUT!CUT! (for mysticventures)" by Zhee
- "Hi Zhee! I have a poem entitled "CUTTING ROOM FLOOR", which I'll post so you can see some (not so) subtle differences on the subject. I just read this, and then thought of my own material."
Posted by Unknown on "CUT!CUT!CUT! (for mysticventures)" by Zhee
- "I enjoyed this . . it rings true . . and the rhyme was very well-done . . great job."
Posted by cre on "THERAPY!" by Zhee
- "i like the way your works like these are short and yet whole. no need for further elaboration, it says what it does well and without the incessant rambling such as I dwell into. well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Murder In The First Degree" by Zhee
- "I never wrote anything like this in my teens. I am, however, thankful that you in fact did. ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "DARKNESS..." by Zhee
- "All the world's indeed a stage, and we are merely players, performers and portrayers. Each another's audience inside a gilded cage. ~Shane~"
Posted by Unknown on "DARKNESS..." by Zhee
- "I was impressed by your rhyme Zhee. An ability I wish I could improve upon."
Posted by Unknown on "THERAPY!" by Zhee
- "Cradling the myriad pieces
Of your disintegrating soul,
Shackled hands reach out –
Pleading to make you whole ... hell yeah, sublime flow with an ironic aura... like your style."
Posted by Unknown on "THERAPY!" by Zhee
- "beautiful imagery here, i love the way the last stanza sort of stops short, (doesnt follow the rhythm of the other stanzas i mean) it causes the last lines to echo through the mind reinforcing the poem."
Posted by stuart_pid on "Blighted Within" by Zhee
- "dammit, i was trying to write something very similar to this but yours is much better than mine. good work zhee."
Posted by stuart_pid on "BLEEDING WORDS" by Zhee
- "ding ding ding, we have a winner. love the use of language, the manipulations in your word scheme are a delight, you have a great grasp of how words should be portrayed. well done."
Posted by Unknown on "The Answer (To Elective Subjugation)" by Zhee
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