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The Answer (To Elective Subjugation)
By Zhee
The raging emotional tempest
Rampant upon fragile senses,
Breaks through crumbling armor
Of your infantile defenses.
The ever-fixated paradigm,
The festering nidus of rejection,
Ingrained upon the soul
Helplessness to perfection.
The automaton walks on
Enraged but perpetually frail,
When all you have is a hammer
You treat everything like a nail…
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Thursday, September 16, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
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wrote:
your style is something else. you manipulate things so easily
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A former member wrote:
Veindefined hit the nail on the head. Some of your word choices/diction here reminds me of my own.
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A former member wrote:
ding ding ding, we have a winner. love the use of language, the manipulations in your word scheme are a delight, you have a great grasp of how words should be portrayed. well done.
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On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Jonas
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ah, the transference, the negative as it moves like an electron through the copper of a blind society...
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