Elective Subjugation (Why Don't You SEE??!!)
By Zhee
(to a patient....)
Flaunt the mutilated ugliness,
Curse your condemning stars,
Bury the mortifying shame
In your exhibitionistic scars.
Barricade the frigid passages
To where the fragile ego lies,
The deluge of prismatic tears
Mourning its tormented demise.
Rave blatant persecution
Wreaked by the psychotic mind,
Blind the self to the sacrilege
Of the innocence once enshrined.
Embrace the vacant threats,
Take sanctuary in your denial,
Indulge in self-inflicted humiliation
So you can feel worthwhile…
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Copyright 2004 Zheala
Published on Wednesday, September 15, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Elective Subjugation (Why Don't You SEE??!!)"
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On Friday, October 8, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
amazing work, powerful
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
beautiful, they be shut down now! another killer write.~~~Grave
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A former member wrote:
Thankfully, I'm not one of your patients. Poetry prevents me from becoming this. Your word choices are very interesting. No qualms here.
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
oh wow, powerful message, i am impressed by your in depth perceptions
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, A Broken Soul
(80) wrote:
wow, amazing word choice...
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
damn Zhee - that was an awsome write!!
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A former member wrote:
are you sure this isn't to all your patients or maybe just everyone in general
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A former member wrote:
I liked this poem I think it's very well done even though it kind of made me feel bad
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On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
superb rhyme here,love your style,observations to admire here and a terrific expression of such