Comments by All Members
- "Talk about an onset of anxiety, glad I'm not in a very influenceable state of mind at the moment"
Posted by Unknown on "Distance" by JiNx
- "im sorry hun...that sounds really tough...but dont give in to the despair, pray to Jesus to make you new...life's tough...it really is...but God knows deep suffering...talk to him, he'll relieve u of ur pain and hurt and anger...strong words...stay strong "
Posted by Unknown on "Rape Victim's Mind" by JiNx
- "Wow Jinxie, very deep I can feel your emotions bleeding through the words. Beautifully and yet painfully written. I loved this! I miss you and love you "
Posted by K_Love on "As I Am Inside The Looking Glass" by JiNx
- "you can't know how angry i am at all this.and if it's of any concolation. the worst pains in life breed the artists.and you are one hell of a writer.Pain is not so bad if you know how to feel.and i can see that you do. love, Pandora."
Posted by Unknown on "Lost Innocence (Warning - May be a Bit Disturbing)" by JiNx
- "to not feel real, recognize no.thing in the reflection of some.one,who has become...distant from the self in the shatter.ed.ness...i feel this...though i know, there is more, inside, than what seems to [currently]be."
Posted by AniDayz on "As I Am Inside The Looking Glass" by JiNx
- "great poem...but i think the last 4 lines was a little too much of the rhyming...but your choice of words was great. you have great talent...good job;)"
Posted by Unknown on "...Plastic is the New Skin.." by JiNx
- "i like this one...it has a nice flow to it. sometimes rhymes can be too much but you did a great job with it. overall-- great poem"
Posted by Unknown on "Shame" by JiNx
- "...from my standard of writing, the rhyming was truly awesome; ABAB is hard enough to pull off and sound good at it...otherwise, the structure of it was kind of lacking...a rhyme without meter is like a meter without rhyme..."
Posted by SilentStalker on "...Plastic is the New Skin.." by JiNx
- "nehhh. though you have pinpointed quite a bit of worldly truth.. there is certainly beauty to be found in every moment of our lives.. even the bad ones.. and this i know to be true. Great wording and delivery jinxie! ~b"
Posted by blue on "...Plastic is the New Skin.." by JiNx
- "so goes the story of the broken heart and the crucified soul. great write i loved it."
Posted by Unknown on "Alone" by JiNx
- "very good write sis..i wish to see more in the future..bcuz..well..your my sis..and your writes always rock..and i love you..and never forget it! ♥♥♥ -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "A None Existing Twist" by JiNx
- "Very very nice my dear.
Can't breathe this air.
It's contaminated...
Filled with particles of hate.
Love those lines. Keep up the magnificint work Jessie."
Posted by DarkSoul on "A None Existing Twist" by JiNx
- "A really good poem, Jessie. You might want to fix up some typo's and spelling errors though."
Posted by Unknown on "Fix Me?!?!" by JiNx
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