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Alone
By JiNx
Never felt so alone
To much pain to bare
Things go on unknown
This life isn't fair
Everyone dies...
I'm left feeling lonely
I can't even cry
Can't help thinking "If only"
Memories fill my mind
The past scares me
and nothing I find
Will change how I'll forever be
I'm lost in my past
and I can't be saved
Things happen so fast
Why can't I mend?
Someone make this pain...
go away for atleast today
This can't be vain
I'm fading away...
Sitting in the darkness
Think about all this
Surrounded by sadness
Thinking of the ones I miss
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Copyright 2004 Jessie Nicole
Published on Sunday, August 22, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Alone"
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A former member wrote:
so goes the story of the broken heart and the crucified soul. great write i loved it.
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A former member wrote:
reminds me of my poem called alone but this was an awesome write i loved it
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A former member wrote:
i can relate to this. truly amazing
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, rondant
(58)
wrote:
very deep, you have the gift
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On Thursday, October 28, 2004, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
i feel that why too good write very good
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On Thursday, September 23, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
alone....i use to embody that word...good interperetation...-]darkness[-
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A former member wrote:
I can relate to this all too well....amazing write
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A former member wrote:
i can relate. this is great writing, jinx.
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A former member wrote:
Can't help thinking "If only"/ those two words always invade my head. and I say them every time I go outside and see thw world and my parents. If only I was adopted. Killer work
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