i dont want to die but it hurts too much to live

By Syn

you didnt stop me
and I couldnt stop you
two lives entwined in these dreadful hearts
in losing all our time

and i cry at the death
of anything we had
and i bleed at the thought
of me treating you so bad(ly)

what i wouldnt give to taste you
what i wouldnt give to breathe you
what i woulndt give to see you
yet i can only dream you

and this incoherence is killing me
your words in riddles
my thoughts in shame
can i please end this now?
please let me end the game

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Published on Saturday, August 7, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "i dont want to die but it hurts too much to live"

On Friday, August 13, 2004, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

all of it so heartbreakingly intense. The third section is outstanding. great write
On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Lynaes (854) wrote:

Wow.. I can relate to this on an incredible level, every single line. I have to say this is my favourite of yours that I've read. Just, wow. Awesome work here. The emotion so fluent.
On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

ver nice
On Saturday, August 7, 2004, DarkWolf (415) wrote:

"and i bleed at the thought" lovely wording, and all of stanza 3 is wonderfully sorrowful. -Michael
On Saturday, August 7, 2004, addicted_angel (21) wrote:

very nice, addicted_angel
On Saturday, August 7, 2004, JiNx (98) wrote:

wow... I like alot... good write! *JiNx*