A None Existing Twist

By JiNx

A strong feeling of dismay.
A loss of love or care.
Feelings of decay.
Can't breathe this air.
It's contaminated...
Filled with particles of hate.
My thoughts just can't be stated.
Not sure what to think of this state.
This pigment of mind.
My loss of feeling,
and thoughts never pleasant or kind.
Not sure how this equation is dealing.
Losing track of so called time,
pondering if life really exists.
Falling for a rhyme...
A none existing twist.

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© 2005 Jessie Nicole
Published on Tuesday, November 22, 2005.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, November 26, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    awww...*huggles* I like it. Scholar

  • Forgotten Angel On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    very good write sis..i wish to see more in the future..bcuz..well..your my sis..and your writes always rock..and i love you..and never forget it! ♥♥♥ -Kel

  • DarkSoul On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, DarkSoul (19)By person wrote:

    Very very nice my dear. Can't breathe this air. It's contaminated... Filled with particles of hate. Love those lines. Keep up the magnificint work Jessie.

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