Comments by All Members
- ""To paint my insecurties.. In a shade of red" - I like tentative admittance of own issues. And I enjoyed the rhythm with which the poem was flowing. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Flat on "The Inevitable Question..." by Deadly Embrace
- "Just glides along like silk, and tastes like fresh air. Very pretty piece. Clean and neat. Nice composition, and I loved the freeverse rhyme. Always have enjoyed that style of poetry. Good on ya."
Posted by Alanarchy on "A Moment Of Clarity..." by Deadly Embrace
- "The last 4 lines from the 2nd stanza(?), amazing. The rising hope at the end-though the sadness still dwelled within, seems almost glorious, like the rising phoenix out from the ashes, though still torn inside. Beautiful, as always. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "A Million Tears Falling.." by Deadly Embrace
- ""Beauty is ephemeral, pain is forever" what a devistating finality those astounding words bring to this one. Crushing Hope beneath your elegant mastery of word. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "Beauty is... [ephemeral]" by Deadly Embrace
- "The Dark Romantic in you.. The pain-filled soul.. I really love the way you write. My Wolf-Mate has wept many times reading your works. So very talented you are. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "Seconds To Heartbreak" by Deadly Embrace
- "Those last two lines... you are such the deep-hearted romantic are you not? Easy, you may bleed, yet all the minions of hell could not break your loyalty. So rare. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "Letting Go?" by Deadly Embrace
- "I love the de(a)dication of the ending, I pr(e)y you find the one who understands and shares your devotion with you, endlessly. -Michael"
Posted by DarkWolf on "Tears Of Tragedy" by Deadly Embrace
- "I was reading the poetry that was new, and I read this one. I really think that it's really really good. When I read it it made me feel something that I can't quite place, But It really is an amazing piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Seconds To Heartbreak" by Deadly Embrace
- "Lack of devotion. Sounds like somebody might have been a bit unfaithful. Whatever the case this is still a beautiful write. The beauty of pain is it makes for great inspiration :)"
Posted by VenomPlease on "Letting Go?" by Deadly Embrace
- "Wow...beautiful write...I know how that is...wow...currently going through something like that...great poem..."
Posted by Mahakala on "Letting Go?" by Deadly Embrace
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