I Cry..
By Deadly Embrace
I cry because..
the world is so cold
that people turn their backs
with no comfort to hold
For people look down
on the one's who are crying
forever in torment
they lay broken and dying..
I cry because..
These scars will not heal,
But in this life
it seems that pain
is the only thing thats real
To leave me numb
Something love cannot cure
Nor any medications
for the hate that's endured
I cry because..
I'm filled with agony
with my love miles away
nothing left but memories,
Because this life is not
a perfect one,
As the tears turn
to shards
of a life that has not
yet begun..
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Copyright 2004 Deadly Embrace
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A former member wrote:
Love it, sounds like thoughts out of my own head. Love the last line
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A former member wrote:
I love the title it's very unique, yet simple among others
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
Tormenting.. this life is indeed not perfect.. your feelings though seem perfectly expressed with these words.. very beautiful they are.. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
this heart is not a borken one, but where have all the colrs gone. _finger eleven. thats been in my head for days. needed to type it
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On Sunday, June 20, 2004, Deadly Embrace
(41) wrote:
-feels loved- thank you :) -DE
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On Saturday, June 19, 2004, Heart of Stone
(24) wrote:
This was so amazing. The way this made me feel, is nothing words can describe. This is definitely a favorite. Pure truth and that's beautiful. -Heart
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On Saturday, June 19, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Deep write. I loved every word. I can understand some parts of this poem a lot. Great write! ~Kirsten~
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful!!! I really think you've got a masterpiece here.
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On Saturday, June 19, 2004, Cwn Annwn
(89) wrote:
That was a deep poem...I loved it, great write~GoNe~