Comments by All Members
- "This deserves more attention. Is a dark and yet strangely childlike hymn that suggest childhood ending soon..."
Posted by Spiral Downward on "My Angel..." by Dayer
- "This has always been a delightfully clever, morbidly dark and brilliantly constructed. The way this flowed made it easy to illuminate the mastery of your words... Great write
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Posted by Spiral Downward on "The Dark Angel of Mercy" by Dayer
- "wow very powerful, i very much enjoyed this. it is unfortunate that we see this all too often though, but anyways thanks for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "Broken" by Dayer
- "I've experienced something similar to this, your poem very accurately describes how i felt. Good write. "
Posted by Despair on "No rhyme" by Dayer
- "That was... there are no words. What a chilling tale, what a wonderful enticement, what addictive wordings! Oh my, my, my what an utterly INCREDIBLE work!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Dark Angel of Mercy" by Dayer
- "I really, really enjoyed reading this. I can connect with this completely. I loved how it started out about this girl then flowed into your life. Great work"
Posted by mindsurfer on "11/7/2005" by Dayer
- "some lines seemed a tiny bit forced but all in all this peice flowed amazingly...i love the emotion and the last couplet blew me away."
Posted by Unknown on "Some time passed...." by Dayer
- "That is an awesome write.. Oh my.. wow.. very nicely done and I enjoyed the flow.. definetly caught me and made me keep reading.. -JiNx(ie0"
Posted by JiNx on "The Dark Angel of Mercy" by Dayer
- "this is a very good story. I liked it however, i have to say the structure at the end i didnt like that much. Maybe thats just me. Shugs. dunno. good poem though. ~gothic~"
Posted by GothicBlack on "The Dark Angel of Mercy" by Dayer
- "Wow, I love the power in this piece. Nice work! ~Mary"
Posted by MGood on "Broken" by Dayer
- "Awesome...reminds of this quote. Its not what goes into the mouth its what comes out of it because does the stomach not digest it? What comes out just floats into the sky along with everyone elses shit...
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Posted by Unknown on "Subliminal 3" by Dayer
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