Some time passed....

By Dayer

Some time has passed
Since I wrote here last
Didn't see how quickly
Time had passed
Couldn't think of why
Things happened so fast
Fearing hearts
Ending up in casts
I'd write more now
But I'm distracted
With memories of
How you acted
Style plus grace
My thoughts impact
I just can't keep my mind in tact
I can see you now
Trying not to look
Just wanting some time
To write in this book
But I'm stealing glances
Like a crook
I'm sorry for all
The time I took
To tell you
How much I did feel
To let you know
That I was real
To have you keep
The heart you'd steal
I should've asked
"Hey, what's the deal?"
Babygirl
Between you and me
We could live
So happily
Forever my love
Soon you'll see
One plus one
That's unity

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© 2005 Dayer
Published on Monday, November 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: some lines seemed a tiny bit forced but all in all this peice flowed amazingly...i love the emotion and the last couplet blew me away.

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Monday, November 7, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul (143)By person wrote:

    nice write i know exactly how you feel. ~gothicangel~

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