Broken

By Dayer

He broke her...
As she stared deep into his eyes
She saw nothing more than faceless lies
At that moment she began to see
Being with him meant to never be free
She'd created a fantasy to help understand
Why beating a woman, made him more of a man
Night after night she had dealt with his games
And day after day she had lived with the pain
She watched as the blood flowed freely from his head
And thanked God for the gun she kept next to her bed
Once broken

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Published on Monday, June 14, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Broken"

A former member wrote: wow very powerful, i very much enjoyed this. it is unfortunate that we see this all too often though, but anyways thanks for sharing
On Tuesday, November 29, 2005, MGood (60) wrote:

Wow, I love the power in this piece. Nice work! ~Mary
A former member wrote: Even if it's broken, that's the way to fix it! I like.
On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

The ending kinda threw me off but the rest of it good. =)
On Wednesday, August 18, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

Thanks :)
On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, addicted_angel (21) wrote:

well written, addicted_angel
On Saturday, August 7, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

Thank you both ~*~Dayer~*~
On Monday, June 14, 2004, K_Love (525) wrote:

Wow... truly a masterpiece indeed. Very beautiful, Riveting and suspensful! Great outcome of an ending.. she shouldn't put up with that anyways.. *claps* ~Kirsten~
On Monday, June 14, 2004, Heart of Stone (24) wrote:

*rubs hands together* I really like this. It's beautifully evil. Great Job -Heart