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Subliminal 3
By Dayer
Eating new
And
Tasty food
Makes
Our belly quit
Rumbling, for it is now
Excited, as well as the tongue, whose
Very purpose is to
Excite our senses with
Good, no
Great new tastes, salivating with each
Incredible mouthful, oh this
Exciting new taste, if only it could
Stay on our tongue forever...
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Copyright 2004 Dayer
Published on Wednesday, September 8, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Subliminal 3"
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On Tuesday, June 9, 2009, Malice In Wonderland
(987)
wrote:
Hell yes.I love food, quite simply, deserving tribute. Vivid,too.
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On Saturday, June 16, 2007, carlosjackal
(3019) wrote:
Love that last line. Eating is one of my all-time favourite things. -Carl
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A former member wrote:
Awesome...reminds of this quote. Its not what goes into the mouth its what comes out of it because does the stomach not digest it? What comes out just floats into the sky along with everyone elses shit...
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On Saturday, September 11, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
this made me hungry :) but i also like meat...veggies are ok, but only as a side dish.
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On Friday, September 10, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
NOW Apathy's comments make sense. It definitely took your hint in the first one for it to dawn on me... you got one over on me >:-)
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A former member wrote:
no thank you I like meat
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A former member wrote:
meat meat meat meat
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On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer
(162) wrote:
meat is good too :p
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