Comments by All Members
- "Amazing! Blackened and or vacant eyes a term I use as well. Empty, soulless,numb,gone. Or as my dad says filled with demons "
Posted by Willow Wept on "Empty" by BloodyMercy
- "I have a pretty vivid image of a person writhing in pain in front of a black, wet window up until the third stanza. "Blackened vacant eyes". That's a sure sign that someone is empty inside. Good stuff!"
Posted by Queazenart on "Empty" by BloodyMercy
- "Unfortunately some decisions have a tendency to haunt us forever. Failing isn't an option... thank you for the words of support."
Posted by BloodyMercy on "Still Addicted" by BloodyMercy
- "I've never struggled with a harsh addiction but I just quit smoking a year and a half ago and even now I get cravings to smoke like I just quit last week. I don't think that's ever going to not be that way unfortunately so I can only what it must be like for harder substances, you're doing good keep it up!"
Posted by Unknown on "Still Addicted" by BloodyMercy
- "I felt strangely connected to this. Very uncheerful thoughts indeed, but I liked it. Thanks for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Self Loathing" by BloodyMercy
- "I don't tend to read other's poetry too much. I start most poems but I rarely finish because after a certain length I get bored. (I have a terribly short attention span)
But this was what it should have been; it was not short nor was it long. It was simply beautiful . "
Posted by Eadgar Anton Crowe on "Empty" by BloodyMercy
- "BM, thanks for the fair warning and this got progressively more demanding and demonic; nicely done and the closing was a wild finish. Don't forget to flush :)"
Posted by dwells on "Untitled Decay" by BloodyMercy
- "thanks for this not often you see poetry about bondage its nice to see something new once in a while "
Posted by Unknown on "Taking" by BloodyMercy
- "This reminds me of a Hocico track: "I'm screaming from this place! Can you hear me!?" The desperation you felt really comes through. "
Posted by Cantara on "Is anybody listening?" by BloodyMercy
- "It was originally meant as a song, that didn't pan out for this one. I wrote this quite a long time ago. .. unfortunately the hopelessness hasn't ever completely disappeared. Thanks for the read. "
Posted by BloodyMercy on "Lost in my Mind" by BloodyMercy
- "I have often wondered the same - it wasn't my intention to spark the fires of such anger..we all see this world differently - that's for sure.... Thank you for the comment! A little validation in my sanity! :)"
Posted by BloodyMercy on "The End of Your Time" by BloodyMercy
- "Thank you - I would never have self described with that verbiage... but after reflecting the word melancholy sure does fit."
Posted by BloodyMercy on "Misery.Inside." by BloodyMercy
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