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Is anybody listening?
By BloodyMercy
Hollow
Abandoned
Deafening
Destroyed
The shell of a man is all that’s left
Attempting
Reconstruction
Hallucinating
Expounding
Again…
The shell of a discarded man is all that’s left
Shattered illusions
Felt so real
Crimson ribbon’s appeal
Denied
Hopeless
Barely hanging on
Screaming
Visceral
Alone
Forgotten
The soul escapes
With his last breath
The last regret
Was anybody ever listening?
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Copyright 2014 BloodyMercy
Author's Note:
Inspired by life and How to Destroy Angels "The Wake-Up"Comments on "Is anybody listening?"
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On Saturday, October 1, 2016, Gypsyeighty3
(46)
wrote:
Oh how I can relate! Seems like people only start listening when it's too late sometimes. Enjoying your works!
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On Saturday, February 22, 2014, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
Yes you are heard, your poetry spoke to me and I am listening. thank you for your visit to my profile. I will strive to read more of your work.
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On Saturday, February 22, 2014, BloodyMercy
(64) wrote:
And read you did... thank you much for enjoying and the prolific reviewing! Much appreciated.. especially after reading your works!
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A former member wrote:
very interesting read, much enjoyed thanks for sharing, i will definitely look forward to more
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, BloodyMercy
(64) wrote:
Thank you!
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On Saturday, February 8, 2014, Void Vortex
(303) wrote:
Soul shattering... and no one heard the glass break. Many emotions run through me when reading this. Thanx for sharing :]
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On Saturday, February 8, 2014, BloodyMercy
(64) wrote:
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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On Saturday, February 8, 2014, blue angel
(877) wrote:
You'd be surprised to know the haunting words left behind when you thought no one was listening. Nice write, thanks for sharing :)
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On Saturday, February 8, 2014, BloodyMercy
(64) wrote:
Thank you for your thoughts . .they ring loudly in my head.
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A former member wrote:
the sad answer is no, and that is well expressed in this sorrowful and emotional tale. well done.
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On Saturday, February 8, 2014, BloodyMercy
(64) wrote:
To the answer... I agree. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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