Comments by All Members
- "such a sad/crushing, emotive piece; i felt this absolutely... The line Alanarchy quoted is excellent, as are the following two... great work. words like the ones you write of have bitten me too."
Posted by purr_verse on "Children's Way" by gracefullytorn
- "the last four lines are brilliant...I also love the pace...it's almost fast moving, but then I had to slow down to read every frightening line.."
Posted by girlafraid on "Icy death" by gracefullytorn
- "beautiful and melancholic; immersive and evocative...i can feel the chill... i particularly like the line "six sided flakes of agony" ... very nice. :)
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Posted by purr_verse on "Icy death" by gracefullytorn
- "whoah... anyone considering climbing Everest should read this first. Scary as hell - great descriptives. I really liked "snow never looked so painful". Great stuff. Fox"
Posted by flying_fox on "Icy death" by gracefullytorn
- ""open wounds frozen shut crying tears of ice", this is my favorite part. I love this you putting images in my mind, I feel all of this great write ~Kirsten~"
Posted by K_Love on "Icy death" by gracefullytorn
- "this is absolutely brilliant totally vivid, i really feel the words, and the coldness, a compelling illustrating illustriuos poem, leaves me feeling quite warm your just brilliant"
Posted by Anth on "Icy death" by gracefullytorn
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