My Sweet Heaven

By gracefullytorn

It was hell by day and heaven by night
Her eyes shown like piercing diamonds worth more than money can buy
He wiped away her gleaming tears and told her it was ok
They would make it
This fight was nothing
She was wishing this was true as she looked at the past years with him
A story for each bruise and scar
She would tell herself he didn't mean for anything bad to happen
He never did and it was her fault
She was the one to blame
He would give her hell by day and heaven by night

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Copyright 2004 gracefullytorn
Published on Friday, March 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Beautiful Scars On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    Damn..This is one hell of A peice. *Her eyes shown like piercing diamonds worth more than money can buy* I loved this..great work, keep it up. -fairy-

  • Alanarchy On Friday, March 26, 2004, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    I'm going with Bastie on this one. Damn. Great peice. Welcome to DP. Please keep writing

  • KittyStryker On Friday, March 26, 2004, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    wow. this is stark, naked. wretched feeling. the simplicity here cuts.

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