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Seeping Darkness
By gracefullytorn
Stabbing fear
Icy cold
Trickling tears
Growing old
Fate ahead
No looking back
Wish I took a different path
Pathetic voices
Yearning deep
Hard to follow
Darkness seeps
Overcoming never near
All these secrets seem to leer
Twisting, turning, going fast
Lets try and make this one love last
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Copyright 2004 gracefullytorn
Published on Friday, March 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Seeping Darkness"
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A former member wrote:
its beautiful. lovely
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A former member wrote:
Wonderful write! It resonates with a sad, bittersweet love... --Kaosu
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On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, whisperer
(166)
wrote:
i like this one possibly because its always that way with me...great write!-]darkness[-
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A former member wrote:
I love this one. very effective on how I've been feeling lately...
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
The rhyme was so akward. Really added to the effect. Very dizzying. I'm enjoying your stuff.
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