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Innocence Lost
By gracefullytorn
Her innocence was ripped away
It only took one summer day
She lost them both with a hit and run
She was at a party having fun
Came home to learn they were no longer there
To be for her to love and care
Now she has to grow up
Her childhood was taken
Their lives gone and hers forsaken
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Copyright 2004 gracefullytorn
Published on Friday, March 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Innocence Lost"
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On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Daegonna
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wrote:
wonderfully written! I love it...
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2004, gracefullytorn
(61) wrote:
thanks so much for commenting.
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
nice write. i have one titled the same. A_C
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A former member wrote:
youre incredible. u have a great way of telling a story in a poem without making it sound corny. i cant wait to read more works by u.
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On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
wow..how sad..*their goes A tear* .::hugz::. -fairy-
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
You are a breath of fresh air. Please continue.
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
fast and tragic, like the wreck you mention. wow. intense.
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