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Don't Tell Me
By gracefullytorn
The night you whispered you loved me
I cried for endless hours wishing these words were true
The night you whispered you loved me
I whispered back the words I love you too
The night you whispered you loved me
I knew it was a lie
The night you whispered you loved me
I couldn't look into your eyes
The night you whispered you loved me
I took my last breath and said goodbye
I could not go on living this lie
I loved you.
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Copyright 2004 gracefullytorn
Published on Friday, March 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Don't Tell Me"
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On Sunday, July 16, 2017, worm
(1149)
wrote:
sounds like true love to me... the only problem is love is NEVER an equal division... one ALWAYS loves more than the other...
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
Wow. The aching trapped in here, the desperation, the resignation. Wow.
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On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Daegonna
(27) wrote:
this is wonderfully written. and its so true alot of people say it and dont mean it and i loved the ending ~Daegonna~
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A former member wrote:
i really liked the repition it was really affective. as alanarchy said you have a way with words
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A former member wrote:
This one really got to me, especially then end. nice work.
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
This hurt. I love it when poetry leaves me feeling. You have a way with words that does just that. nice one.
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