Gossiping Flowers

By gracefullytorn

As morning lurks behind me the flower petals lean in to hear the words trickling from my tongue
They gossip of my madness and tease me about my schizoid ways of life
I scream out for God to listen
I can’t take it anymore!
This game of deceit and false distortion of systematic alliances cannot be what I live for
I scream out incomprehensible words of nonsense and bolt out of bed
The flower garden is mocking me
Teasing as they sway in the wind
I madly pull out the flowers
Severing their little withstanding bodies
When all but one is left I weep for the last one and carefully pull it out
This last one is like someone I know too well
Someone I know
Way too well

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Copyright 2004 gracefullytorn
Published on Friday, March 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Superb effort and can see why Mikey faved this piece. Very well wrought indeed! -Carl

  • BoldSolitude On Friday, May 27, 2005, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    Very intriguing story, I can relate so well, the ending was perfect.

  • gracefullytorn On Friday, December 10, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    thanks i havent gotten a comment in a while..I almost forgot about DP.

  • A former member wrote: Oh Wow. The imagery is just astounding. Such glorious textures and colors and well, as for the gossiping flowers, you have my sincere admiration.

  • A former member wrote: Damn Those Flowers... Excelently written :)

  • Beautiful Scars On Thursday, April 8, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    I agree, you do posses alot of talent...use it in the rite way. -fairy-

  • Alanarchy On Friday, March 26, 2004, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Wow. You are VERY talented. I am impressed. This really gripped me, from beginning to end. Nicely done. I have to fav this. For some reason it... Sticks with me.

  • KittyStryker On Friday, March 26, 2004, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    awwww... this was really... sad. :( maybe the flowers aren't taunting you... you should sit quietly and listen... maybe all they want to do is whisper a little light into your life. :)

  • gracefullytorn On Friday, March 26, 2004, gracefullytorn (61)By person wrote:

    Thanks for commenting..I'm new to this site and I hope you read some of my other works.

  • Anth On Sunday, March 28, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    this is so so brilliant, i love how this is written, one of my faves

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