Comments by All Members
- "i like how you threw the little nursery rhyme in there. this is an excellent poem with a lot of sorrow. i like the repetition of the last line also, makes it sink in."
Posted by stuart_pid on "a girl i once knew" by theBAC
- "the flow was awesome. like a river running from itself...beautiful."
Posted by Twilight on "nobility" by theBAC
- "very intreresting-in so little words i believe alot can be taken from this piece. cool stuff:)"
Posted by Twilight on "whiskey dick" by theBAC
- "this is beautiful. love can be transient sometimes, and it's frightenign to think what matters so much now may just be a fading photograph in the future."
Posted by KittyStryker on "midnight has come & gone" by theBAC
- "this is wicked,a great image ,as always,and i come away from your works having thought something new and powerful"
Posted by Anth on "cathedral" by theBAC
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